Have you read a subliminal poem on your red bubble home page ???

Have you read a subliminal poem on your red bubble home page ???
By accident I was reading the titles of my friends page and as I read the titles the extracts made this poem. It might be a neat game to see if anyone else has left any subliminal poems. My extracts are a verse a time so mine did not work.
my friend

I thank you
clouds as black as my heart
beautiful immortal
me and you and blue skies,
watch the colours falling to the ground,
eternal,
restless,
realised,
resolute,
righteous,
elegance,
reality,
gentle ,
inventive.
one life,
pounding,
understanding-me.
A universe in your mind,
death is not the end.
I stand naked with a knife in my hand.
just one tiny miricle,
inside the tears of frustration build.
Could it be the rising sun?
No more events that can not feel.
The first time I kissed your lips,
the flowers blossomed in her garden of delight,
There is no time but the present.
to make your senses clear.
There is no love quite as pleasant.
As the one I can’t hold dear.
So I am holding out for someone.
A love so far from reason.

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