raw and vulnerable
i wake up
my skin is tight
on the inside of my stomach
last night’s nightmare
sits with me still
cradled just under my ribs
Sometimes, I frighten myself with the intensity of my emotions and how vehemently they threaten to spill out. There are times when I am uncertain whether they have spilled out, or if they have simply raged so hard on the inside, that the residual feelings have pooled around me, coloring the air…
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wow nice… have had this feeling before too for sure
I’m glad I’m not the only one!
raw and powerful
Last night was…rough. Thank you for commenting
I know this feeling all too well….and yes the fear of having intense emotions.
xxx
Intense emotions rock the boat. They make our insecurities that much more apparent…they reveal our demons to inhospitable crowds…
take care of yourself, lest you know that you alive
haha! Excellent advice! ^_~
keep writing my friend…sometimes those very emotions produce our most mind blowing work. I like this piece….
this is some great strong writing;
i like it very much
such a deep emotion conveyed within a few well chosen words, love it
intense emotions….yes, I’m afraid I know how that is. Quite overwhelming actually. This piece is brilliant and captures that feeling well.
Absolutely completely have you written the intensity of a nightmare …..or even a panic attack which I have had in the past….in the past they will remain. Words of few but impact on high sensory!
I’m always trying to douse my intense emotions…you describe the feelings well.