Plastic or Plastic?

You
My friend
Are like a plastic bag
Forever changing-
As transparent as a ghost.
Sometimes full of fun
But other times
Empty
Alone
You fill yourself up with everything you can find
But when others have no use
You find yourself alone
You are often
Materialistic
Whether plain as day
Or adorned
With designer logos
Glamorous on the outside
But empty
Within

Plastic or Plastic?

johnsonKa21

Joined March 2008

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This is for my creative writing class and I need to submit the final poem soon. If you have suggestions, I would greatly take any and all advice on how to fix it. Don’t worry about being harsh, you aren’t grading it and I like advice.

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