The Bite

Wow how everything heated up
Within only a few moments
It started out with innocent touches
Then turned into little kisses
Little kisses led to longer more passionate ones
Those kisses lasted lifetimes.
The kisses slowly turned into nibbling and sucking
The nibbling didn’t bother me
Until you opened you sexy mouth
And bit my neck
The blood trickled down my neck
To my stomach
Then it flowed down my leg
Until it reached my mothers couch…
You blew your breath in the wound
And the skin simmered…
I was slowly being cooked
It hurt so bad, but it made me moan
I started to cry
Then you took a razor blade
And sliced my stomach
To shreds.
You didn’t care
You didn’t stop there…
Out came new weapons to destroy
The mind, body, and soul of the innocent girl that lay before you
A knife was used next…
Cut the lips of my punani
It burned.
You sucked the blood
But didn’t catch it all because it hit the white carpet
I was slowly dying and didn’t recognize the reality of it all
I was screaming “make it hurt”
And that’s just what you did
Pulling my hair you would slice my legs, arms, anything that you could reach
You couldn’t stop!
It was an adrenaline rush for you
The blood made you want it more and more
Then out of no where, you were through
About 10 minutes later
You came back and slit my wrists
Within 3 minutes the innocent girl that once laid before you
Was cold
And no more life was left in her.
Regret what you did
Or hate that it’s over…
It all started with a simple little bite!

The Bite

i ♥ u... do u ♥ me too?

Richland County, United States

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its my first dark peice so like tell me if you hate it… lol
i need the honest truth.
need reactions that show me what to change…
just lemme know

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