Feud - flash fiction

“I’m sorry”

“You said that”

That’ll stump her he thought. The argument had been going on for about an hour now. There’d be been shouting, crying and the throwing of random objects. They were stuck in a stale mate. All that was left was to bitterly reject the apologies for a while, before dramatically falling into each others arms and kissing fiercely.

He found the formulaic nature of their feuds comforting. Not that they fought all the time, and not that they normally fought like this. He had always known where he stood with her. Right up until now.

“I can’t do this anymore. I’m leaving”. He sat, frozen. In shock words or not really understanding what she had said. He didn’t react at all. Not when the door slammed. Not when she didn’t come home that night. He just sat, frozen.

Feud - flash fiction

danpatmore

Newport Pagnell, United Kingdom

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just trying to write a piece of flash fiction every other day or so, all comments welcome………

I have edited this following some feedback from my wife. I think it flows better

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