wittle archie-swing fun ( could be dangerous )

hi my name is wittle archie, if we havent met before then im very pleased to meet you………
im only sheven yearsh of age and im from a small village called sauchie in scotland in the u.k

this story involves my older brother daniel who is elevan yearsh old

one afternoon danieil my brother set of with a few friends on a trip into the woods nearby . awwwwww and wishing i was so much older so i could go with them…they’d have lots of fun in the woods.. i could hear them screaming and laughing and just having the most bestest time ever…building gang hut’s and tree houses and i cant describe it other than just having fun…untill one day it all went wrong…..one of daniels friends michael had just come back from being on holiday …he said to daniel… why dont we build a swing…well you can imagin the excitement and expressions on daniels face ( yeah yeah yeah ) he said cmone lets do iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit… so they looked around the garden for a peace of old rope ( they would use this to tie round the branch of a tree somewhere in the woods i guess ( but i was wrong ) little to our knowledge there was a small river just on the edge of the woods with the biggest most awesome tree you’ve ever seen just on the river bank…..so daniel and his friends found an old tow rope in the garden shed and went of looking for a tree…thats when they discovered that wonderful tree…by the river…heyyyyyyyyy this’ll do perfect michael said its just like the one i was playing on while on holiday….so together they managed to get the rope around the branch choosen for their swing , the swing was’nt that high but a fall from the swing would be dangerous because you would slip down them embankment and into the river which would be very cold and deep…something us kids would never think about because we’re too busy thinking about having fun…so managing to tie the rope around the branch and putting a stick through the looping at the bottom of the rope, off they went taking it in turn wheeeeeeeee whooooooosh wooooo hoooooo pushing each other back and forth seeing who would brave it out and go the highest and farthest out daniel michael daniel michael daniel michael like they were in competition with each other laughing and hee-ing and haw-ing and just having the time of their lives really untill ( snap ) oh no the stick they put through the rope to sit on gave way and broke daniel was on the swing heeeeeeeeeeeelp he shouted as he heard the stick break slipping from the rope his hands lost grip and started to burn trying desperatley to hold on michael stood back in disbelief ( this isnt happening ) daniel was only going one place …and that was fall straight into the river ( and with a massive splash daniel came down right into the river just missing the rocks with his head ( so you can imagine the dangers he has facing…) help help i cant swim i cant swim daniel was shouting….michael watched frozen like ice because he didnt know what to do and couldnt swim himself……i was playing in the garden at the time ( thats my favourite place when i heard daniels voice ) heeeeeeeeeeeeeelp heeeeeeeeeeeeeelp…i knew something was wrong because i had never heard daniel shout like that before..then michael started shouting with him heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeelp heeeeeeeeeelp wow i thought somethings wrong..so i ran into the house as quickly as i could falling and stumbling and tripping over mum mum mum dad dad dad i called come come.quiiiiiick..mum said calm down archie what is it ) i told my mum and dad i heard daniel and michael shouting for help in the woods near by…..immediatley my mum and dad knew that this was unusual so mum got her jacket and dad put his boots on, i was made stay with a neighbour….untill they’d get back…………….so mum and dad managed to find daniel and michael ,they followed the sounds of their calls for help….there was daniel standing in the river water up to his neck and michael on the river bank where the swing had been made…dad ran into the river and pulled daniel from it and mum gave daniel her jacket to keep him warm…lucky for daniel the river was’nt much deeper or he could have drowned and a good thing michael stayed with daniel and called for help otherwise they’d might not have found daniel in the wood and all the way to the river, or michael may have not found his way back if he’d gpne to get help …so after a little explanation and lesson on saftey from mum and dad they all returned home happy again …i imagine mum and dad were relieved that the dangers were’nt worse and that daniel was safe and well not forgetting michael so hoping you have learned a lesson from my story ( swing fun could be dangerous) ( always ask an adult for some friendly advice or even help in setting up a swing ) look after yourself and your friends and always view the risks involved before doing anything ( this could be life saving stuff ) thanks for taking the time to read my story untill next time you take care ( love archie )

wittle archie-swing fun ( could be dangerous )


ALLOA, United Kingdom

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