what took you so long?

He was under water,
watching her.
Her beauty was that of gods.
Wings sparkling in the moonlight
like the stars up above.
Her skin was the color of the corals
that he cept in the cave that he lived in,
dark pink or light purple
he couldnt deside.
Her hair no less.
Her eyes,
oh her eyes,
there perfection was such
that no words came to mind.
The dress she wore that night was blue,
the prittiest blue there ever was.
He watched her that night,
like every other night,
from the dept of the lagoon
were he lived.
He watched her,
every night.
Becose every night was the same.
she would wonder away
away from the rest of the butterflies.
Wonder away as they sleep
to watch the moon,
the moon,
it was full that night.
So big and beautifull,
but its beauty was nothing next to her.
He was in love,
in love.
And this was the night,
the night that he would speek to her
for the first time
he would confess his love to her,
he was going to kiss her.
He was shure that she would reject him
but he was gonna try anyway.
He swept up
as she flew over him.
Breaking the mist that coverd the whater.
Tucking at her sholder and waist
he took her in his arms
and kissed her.
the moment his cool wet lips hit hers
he knew,
he knew that this was desteny.
the feeling that sweapt through him
was like magic.
For a moment,
but only a moment,
he could feel her eyes widen
and her face get warmer
as a blush creapt its way up her neck.
As he was about to pull away
and get redy for her response,
he felt her kiss back.
He could hear the angels in heven start to sing
as the feeling dubbled.
Then after what felt like a lifetime of bliss
she finaly pulled away.
And wisperd in his ear:
“what took you so long?”

what took you so long?


Reykjavík, Iceland

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this is a little poem that I wrote wile drawing a picture
it will be posted in a sec…
aaaand its up :D
hope youll like
and allso you have to look at the picture to understand the poem
I think o_O

and here is the picture and poem on DeviantART http://asaosk.deviantart.com/art/quot-what-took...

gawd I’m so prod of myself for writing such a LONG poem in ENGLISH
nuff sayd x_x

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