“You may wonder why Indian Corn carries such an array of stunning colours …”
Indian Corn, a humble staple, / unveils a conspicuos treasure / at a closer look
So it seems apt that Martin chose Pilgrim as his User name.
Several weeks ago I started to read ‘The Tibetan Book of Living and Dying’ written by Sogyal Rinpoche. Sogyal having been born and brough…
If she is still alive, I wonder where she is tonight
Never give up the search
Morgan felt the heat rising from the straw and Jei’s warm chest on her back. / Morgan slung a handful of mud, hitting Jei square in the n…
Okay, so my title sucks, but I cant think of anything else. I know its hard to understand when this is only the first chapter but if you have any other ideas, lemme know! Fantasy-ish genre. Alright so these are the first two chapters in a LOOOONG novel, LOL. I have a few more chapters already written but figured I would post just two and see if anyone liked them enough to request the next bits=) Its an adult book, not in the erotica sense, but in the “violence, mature content, and bluntness” context. Just so you know. I know it doesnt seem this way in the first two chapters, but it is soon. Oh and on a personal note, writing is my therapy (kinda) lol so the emotions and situations portrayed are quite real, if they could jump off the page…they would=P
The angry flames licked at the sky, swallowing the house in their hot fury. Another shriek pierced the night and Morgan knew it was Lilya.
Alright people, the next two chapters in my novel. PLEASE if you have not already read the first 2, do so…as these will make no sense otherwise. I have held on to these for a LONG time…as I have hesitated to show them to anyone. They are intense, personal and rather dear to me, hence my apprehension. You will be the first to read them, keep in mind this is unedited. I will not lie, for some of you these may be hard to read. Like I mentioned ADULT CONTENT…and not in a nice way. Should you critique, maturity in this case is appreciated. Thanks tons! Oh and my title sucks, lol if you have any better ideas I would LOVE to hear them!
Suddenly Ali froze, her head shot up and her ears spun around like radars. Her nostrils quivered and she snorted nervously.
Third instalment in my novel. As previously stated, PLEASE read first 2 instalments, so you are caught up with the storyline. All comments and critiques are more than welcome, and if you have ANY ideas on a better title, I would love to know=) Enjoy.
Most of the men were either too drunk or too eager to pull the curtains closed and Morgan was bombarded by images of naked men and grinn…
Well as you can see from title, the NEXT bits in a looong novel, that I am slowly posting on here. If you dont want to read the preceding chapters to get caught up, thats fine. But if you want to critique, please be caught up from chapter one. Any better title ideas are welcome=)
All of a sudden Lilya’s arm shot out of the blackness and grabbed hold of Morgan’s. She shrieked and jumped back, her sister’s charred fl…
More chapters in my novel, shorter ones this time. Same requests as before, please read from chapter one before critquing. If you have any better ideas for a title, ANYTHING is better than what I have=) Thanks again SO much for reading, your time is greatly appreciated.
Her ears strained as she struggled to identify the sound that had woken her. It was a scream, a horse’s scream.
Next part in my novel. This is one of the main climaxes of the book. There will be 3 more or so, working up to a HUGE finale but that will take much time. If you are not caught up on the rest, please do so before commenting. Unless that is, if you have another title in mind…I am STILL at a loss for one=P Oh and I post this now at 5:28 am, after writing since 11pm. SO its a first draft. VERY rough , probably tons of spelling errors since I haven’t even re-read it yet. LOL bear with me, its WAAAAAY too early in the morning for perfection. =P
My dear and wonderful friend Snappy Dave, asked what thanks giving is. I then sent him some information on the holiday, which for those o…
MY WARRIOR’S PRAYER—A POEM BY—DALE CRUM MY STONE—SLIDES SLOWLY—DOWN MY BLADE / WITH THOUGHTS—OF DRAGONS—AND THEIR PREY / FOREMOST …
In a bleak moment of deep introspection, and all of the ways of vilest distraction--wrought I these my words-of haunting truth-to live it now—the test and proof.
My collie photo, Collie Witch for Halloween, has been voted in the Top Ten, Bubblers’ Weekly Challenge group for Holiday Fun photos! I a…
In cornucopian colors, / there’s a burnt fragrance / both savagely Puritan and bold.
Another poem about autumn, this time in a form I completely made up. But I like it. A Jesstina, maybe?
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