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• Femme Fatal' -- Giver Taker Provider of Ill Begotten Impropriety
  by Symmetry44

  Set the flame against him / perpetuated by winds set forth / by breath breathed in anger and anguish / for surely he is pinnacle / to your …

  This was written for a friend who has recently split from her husband and in her anger and haste now presumes to know all and one men alike. / She now lives in utter disenchantment through the eyes of dismay and thus chooses to project such anger forth unto all unsuspecting would be lovers. / If only she would simply close her eyes to anger and open her heart to love again no doubt the very emotions she claims no man could possibly hold are the same ones she currently withholds while exuding the same inner ugly child she herself has set her course against. When we, men and women alike presume to know what it takes to be the other in anger and thus project said anger outwardly are we doing nothing more than exuding our own. Hence, this particular piece was written for her through the eyes of an unbiased witness who happens to love her dearly.

• Judging Talent
  by Arletta

  How is it that one judges a talent? / A writer staggers in and floors many / Flooding tales of life not well lived / Oh they pour in, drop b…

  Just a thought … I was reading a book wherein on the back it said that the author was a writer of staggering talent. Now, she is talented, I grant you; and I begrudge her not her accolades. But the truth is that if it was a fictional story, made up whole cloth, even then it would not be staggering.. but it would be closer. I mean, the story is staggering.. but it is based on the truth of her life and that is what is staggering. Which gave me pause, knowing that .. for I would hardly say she is more talented than Douglas Adams or Stephen King or Georgette Heyer ever were, or even as good in my personal opinion, and she’d never give Steinbeck or Shakespeare a run for their money… it is simply that the story is powerful, then, apparently, that she herself has been acclaimed as staggering. The tale of Ghandi is staggering, and he told some parts of it, but it hardly made him a writer, journalist, film producer, etc. did it? And if he had done those things on his own? Well, the story would still have been staggering, but it still would not have made him anything but what he was. So that is what I was wondering about, talent not Ghandi, and why. It is not that she could not be a staggering writer. It is that to determine it you’d have to see something she wove with words all on her own, not just in the retelling of little events that happened, in the rehashing of old letters. That’s all.

• Judgment
  by sabio

  Judgment / —-—-—- / The foolishness of judgment makes me laugh at myself / The way we criticize the rich for buying luxuries with t…

  Judgment…

• Get Off My Toes
  by Jason Ray France

  Uh…pardon me…

  I wrote this because I got sick and tired of being told how to live my life.

• God's Whisper
  by Jason Ray France

  Listen to your own heart…

  I wrote this after a deep misunderstanding with a loved one.

• Why
  by Jason Ray France

  Why is it so easy for you to criticize me…

  Written at a time that I felt judged and misunderstood.

• Sage Apprentice, One Man's Quest for Truth-Chapter 3: The Awakening
  by Jason Ray France

  When I awoke, I was surprised to realize that it all hadn’t been some kind of crazy dream…

• Magdalene
  by Esum

  Fiddle with the Mary Magdalene secondhand halo / Portray a peasant of a sacred land that is now unstable / This is a man made hell and we’r…

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