This Thing

Lachlan Kent
Author: Lachlan Kent
Word Count: 60
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A sickening thing that breaks a man
Head sits sadly in weak, weary hands
He needs what’s right, what’s true and good
He tries to fight. He knows he should.
What is this thing that lures his eyes
He’s come to hate. Loathe. Despise.
He stops to pray. He knows he must,
To beat this thing… this thing called lust.

This Thing

  • Sharon Perrett

    Sharon Perrett, 7 months ago

    Wow, wonderful writing Lachlan, a short and easy read, very nicely written…....

  • zoeg

    zoeg, 7 months ago

    what passion

  • jianina

    jianina, 6 months ago

    Great subject>>>very intricate…love your word play….instant favorite!! :)

  • caroline caux-evans

    caroline caux-..., 6 months ago

    excellent!

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