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“Be silent, sweet child”

This sin was not yours
Wounds wide open that sting and burn
Pulled from the womb of a pink cradle
Now in darkness you toil

Eyes once filled with grace
Cloaked with oil and blood hate
Tormented as you wonder
In a hellish embrace

Night after night your innocence he takes
Your purity does break
With no sign of escape
Within labyrinths you remain

“Silence…” he says “You must obey”

Speak now no evil
Not one word of strife
Once an angel
Now fallen from paradise

Psyche turned asunder
Vortex of convincing lies
Marbles of black water
A secret held inside demon eyes

“Be silent… Sweet, sweet child”

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Written for the The Writing Challenge# 5 – Nov 30, 2010
Inspired by Not One Word by Ash Silvis

chills…

Tags

challenge, ash, silence, abuse, poetry

I’m your typical young woman who delves in all things artistic… and conventional. Writing is a hobbie—and a preferred one at that. I love music as much as I love reading. Its like breathing. I don’t like false and pretentious people, I’m not quick to anger and I consider myself a dreamer. That’s me in a nutshell, I guess.

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Comments

  • Lisa  Jewell
    Lisa Jewellalmost 4 years ago

    omg that gave me giant chills…..
    and I keep reading that last line

    wonderfully written darling a true holy moly xoxo

  • hahahaha holy moly!!
    Thanks, sweetie!! xx

    – YakusokuNono

  • Arco Iris  R
    Arco Iris Ralmost 4 years ago

    Wow, I thought of many things when I read this. I agree with Lisa, that last line is the one that really gives you the chills. You are starting to fly once again my dear child. The phoenix has come back.
    Iris xoxoxo

  • Yes, ma’am!!
    Gracias siempre Iris xoxoxox

    – YakusokuNono

  • Hugh Fathers
    Hugh Fathersalmost 4 years ago

    Great read!! . . .

  • Thank you very much!

    – YakusokuNono

  • Trenchtownrock
    Trenchtownrockalmost 4 years ago

    The fallen angel and the secrets held inside…makes me want more especially the way you ended the piece.

  • Thanks always, Chris! ;)

    – YakusokuNono

  • lolowe
    lolowealmost 4 years ago

    This was absolutely haunting….I had to breathe deep afterwards. This poem is hypnotic, chilling… what an excellent write!

  • Isn’t it?? haha, even I got the chills. :) Thank you, Lo!

    – YakusokuNono

  • Tony Wilder
    Tony Wilderalmost 4 years ago

    This is a surreal write, well done!
    Eyes once filled with grace
    Cloaked with oil and blood hate
    Tormented as you wonder
    In a hellish embrace

  • Thanks a million, Tony!!

    – YakusokuNono

  • vampvamp
    vampvampalmost 4 years ago

    well done.

  • Thanks!

    – YakusokuNono

  • Ushna Sardar
    Ushna Sardaralmost 4 years ago

  • Tony Wilder
    Tony Wilderalmost 4 years ago

    Congratulations on your feature!!

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