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A demon at my door

BANG!
BANG!

The sound reverberates from the ceiling to the floor.

BANG!

Again, once more.

“A knock on my door? But it’s so late. I wonder who’s it for?”

“It’s Me, let me in.” says a profound haunting voice

“Who’s this Me? Let’s see Me.”

I stumble to the barrier between this visitor who had never visited before. A single deep umber eye looks through the peephole of my soul.

“Who else? Your Want and your Desires… Grant me thoroughfare or must I pay a toll?”

A man but not just any man.

“An angel sent from heaven to knock on my door?”

I’m blinded by his light, his aquamarine eyes and his supple marmol skin; exquisite, divine. But wait, I shake from the resulting diplopia within.

“I am your Longing, your Wisdom and more… I am all your senses heightened, happiness galore.”

The pupil of my umber eye widens and through the tunnel of reality and irrationality, I see the veil of liars.
Beyond the masquerade of beauty, fine promises and hominid looking; an amorphous being of shadow and disdain.

BANG!
BANG!

Again and again.

His angelic presence fading and a proxy convexing; unflagging.

“What is it you want? I have nothing for you here?”

I hold unto my acuity and muster up the courage against his pertinacity.

“You have something I NEED. But please, forgive my forward idiom. I’ve come for your volition.”

“The greatest treasure given to me at birth? You must be crazy!”

The power squeezing out from my girth.

“And in return, your velleity will be yours.”

“There is no need, my wishes I can obtain with a little hard work.”

“Then what of your love? I know for whom you heart pines for. Surrender your volition and Isaac is as good as yours.”

“No, thank you. The man who will love me will come on his own.”

BANG!!
BANG!!

I could sense his desperation in ascension. The idea of stealing my will absolute. I held the heaviness of the door on my shoulders. Resolute.

BANG!!!

And then, he was gone, leaving a bilious sheath over my home. Who would ever believe…

“A demon at my door?”

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The story on an ancient battle between man and his inner darkest self.

The key is to have an iron will.

I’m your typical young woman who delves in all things artistic… and conventional. Writing is a hobbie—and a preferred one at that. I love music as much as I love reading. Its like breathing. I don’t like false and pretentious people, I’m not quick to anger and I consider myself a dreamer. That’s me in a nutshell, I guess.

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Comments

  • S .
    S .over 4 years ago

    course they never use the doorbell lol
    awesome work … great story

  • Only the wussy kind of demons use the doorbell, of course. hahahaha

    And then they speak like: Your house looks faaabulous. Can I have your soul?

    LOL thanks Shoaib.

    – YakusokuNono

  • Norma-jean Morrison
    Norma-jean Mor...over 4 years ago

    This is a bad nightmare, but a wonderful write, bang hold that door, go back to hell you demon……….all love

  • YES! And back to hell he went!

    Thank you for commenting! ^^

    – YakusokuNono

  • AnniG
    AnniGover 4 years ago

    Awesome write…haunting, but brilliant! Well done!

  • Thanks so much!

    xx

    – YakusokuNono

  • Lisa  Jewell
    Lisa Jewellover 4 years ago

    iron will is the key that is for sure,
    intense piece it reminds me a bit of a song from Pulp Fiction, wish I could remember it…

    awesome write. x

  • Then I guess I’ll have to watch the movie again and look for that song.

    Thank you always, Lisa. xx

    – YakusokuNono

  • Trenchtownrock
    Trenchtownrockover 4 years ago

    This is well done lady..love your characterization and how the story flowed from one point to the next effortlessly..kept my attention as well..good work.

  • Glad you enjoyed it, my friend. ^^

    – YakusokuNono

  • 8stealydans
    8stealydansover 4 years ago

    AWESOME my heart is still racing!!

  • Thank so much!

    xx

    – YakusokuNono

  • Tony Wilder
    Tony Wilderover 4 years ago

    Wonderfully creative, well done YOU!!!!

  • And thank YOU for visiting!!

    xx

    – YakusokuNono

  • Cosimo Piro
    Cosimo Piroover 4 years ago

    loved this! Such a description of an age old story to remind us that it’s not so old after all. Inner strength and belief……always our best allies. Lovely to meet you and and be introduced to you through this. A pleasure. xx

  • Thank you and likewise! I’m so happy you stopped by. You, sir, I admire very much.

    xx

    – YakusokuNono

  • kalaryder
    kalaryderover 4 years ago

    Great writing

  • Thank you much.

    – YakusokuNono

  • ModernMythology
    ModernMythologyover 4 years ago

    Incredibly powerful!

  • Thanks very much.

    – YakusokuNono

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