Empty Chest
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Fingers dance into my web of brown
Tangling in the messy strands of hair
The glint in your honest eyes,
Fingertips that trace the lines,
In my face like paths into forests
Shooting me glances with half-smiles
I catch glimpses of the secrets, lies
That are hidden deep inside your pores
And you always come back to bathe inside,
Back to swim into the depths of my empty chest
Where our bodies will slide across dirty motel rooms
Just so my eyes can snap open to nothing but,
The tint of orange that seeps through window cracks,
Where the only thing to cradle me is the permanent
Taste of you on my tongue and red-stained carpets
No body knows you the way I do
manutdwriter
Written very well, would you mind having a look at my piece “The calling.”
Vivian F replied
Thank you. :)
Leda D
love the title and the work, fantastic
Vivian F replied
Thanks so much.
skinnyman
love this piece Vivian. I think it explores a hiddden side of you, maybe? x
Vivian F replied
Hidden side of me? Hmm, definitely could be. x
RebeccaWeston
Excellent writing, Vivian XX
Becca
Vivian F replied
Thank you, Becca xx
Trijpmaker
Nice One
I liked it.
Vivian F replied
Thank you very much.
Erika .
a personal piece so brilliantly written .xx
Vivian F replied
Thanks Erika. Always nice to hear from you. xx
RosaCobos
Bautiful bathing ….
crawling from the womb….
up to the chest..
where the passion of living,
is tensing the strings of heart beatings.
Rosa (great… as always highly sensual and sensible.)
Vivian F replied
Thank you Rosa.
CrystalNoellyn
You have a nice way with words, Vivian. Keep it up.