Still Want To Feel

Author: Vivian F
Word Count: 80
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Still Want To Feel

Being happy doesn’t mean everything is perfect. It means you have decided to look beyond the imperfections.

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I used to bite my tongue,
In the midst of awkward conversation
Then I found you, a treasure
Underneath the oceans
You didn’t hesitate to touch
With my tarnished edges,
And fragile surface,
You still want to feel
My suitcases are full of nothing,
No pants, no shirt, no clothes
But you let me wear my smile so well
A crooked grin with coffee stained teeth
But you kiss me just the same
You still want to feel me

Erika .

So true, my friend. I love this one, the message so beautifully expressed. x
Vivian F replied

Thank you Erika. So glad you liked it. x
oneperfectkiss

This is beautiful Vivian. x
Vivian F replied

Thank you so much. xx
skinnyman

love it vivian, there is a softness, more than contentment to it, a this is where i am and i like it feeling comes through. x
Vivian F replied

Thanks, Peter. x
RosaCobos

The message is he media.
And your words fit with the poem…
perfectly.
Rosa (simple and clear… a virtue)
Vivian F replied

Thank you so much Rosa.
veritasunsaid

awesome!!!
great message, great imagery, great writing…HELL…all of its great:)
Vivian F replied

Haha. Aw, thanks so much :D
Hannah Fenton-...

This was just featured in
The beauty of poetry
Vivian F replied

Thank you so much! :D
skinnyman

did you decypher my comment, don’t what happened, sounded ok in my head lol, love the piece x
Vivian F replied

Haha, yes I did. Don’t worry, it sounds okay in my head too lol. Thank you x
warmsoul

This is beautiful Vivian
Vivian F replied

Thank you.
happyfeet5

Beatifuly written. You let everyone know that beauty is only skin deep.
Vivian F replied

Thank you very much.