I Promise, I Am Fine
I Promise, I Am Fine belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry !, All Around the Styles, All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Bits and Pieces , Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Everyday Life, Freedom In Words & Art, Graphic Scratch, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, On Youth, Something To Say, The Word Tree, Up & Coming Writers and WMGThere is no God. But when hope is gone, I’m on my knees.
The trees have frittered away. But my palm holds the leaves.
The cup is always half full. But it never quenches my thirst.
My limp heart hopes for the best. But it expects the worst.
I stand between the sea of bodies. But I am alone.
I remain under the roof of my house. But I wish for home.
My fingers stroke your skin. But I don’t feel a thing.
My hands will always take. But they will never bring.
The clocks are shattered. But I am out of time.
My wallet explodes green. But I won’t spare a dime.
My body aches for water. But the tub is full of kerosene.
The disease dwells inside me. But I deny the vaccine.
I whisper, “Love me.” But I scream, “Stop!”
The key burns my pocket. But the cage remains locked.
I dare preach the words we’re too afraid to say. But I have no tongue.
I breathe the warm gentle breeze. But I have no lungs.
I can see the world better than most. But I am blind.
My ribs are broken. But I promise, I am fine.
skinnyman
wonderful!
Vivian F replied
Thanks!
natapee
fantastic work full of truths.
Vivian F replied
Thank you.
xxbloodloverxx
That’s amazing Viv. You are truly a talented writer. This is fanominal
Vivian F replied
:) Aw. Thanks, Ash.
IntriCate
Wow, so apt about the push and pull of all in our lives. Hmmmm this evokes emotions which cannot be expressed, definitely recognition and upheaval – thank you for sharing this.
Vivian F replied
Thank you for reading :)