Darling, when I hold you.

Darling, when I hold you
Nothing will ever feel the same
You’d bring me close
While we try to kill the pain
But we know nothing good lasts forever
So let it just be
As we dance together
Out in the pouring rain

When you just need some time
On your own
To numb the pain
With a bottle of something strong
Acknowledging that life must go on

But when I’m just in love with you
So very much
Everything else, I just don’t give a stuff
Needing time to just release
The pain
While the tides eb and flow
Realizing it was your own right
Your time to go

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Inspired write by: Guns N Roses song ‘November Rain’.


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  • Donna19
    Donna19over 2 years ago

    I really like this one too. I have been reading through your profile and it is clear you are in touch with the reality of being. You capture very well what most find illusive. Really well done writing.

  • Donna, WoW what an inspiring compliment. I’m glad you like my writing. It’s been hidden for far too long that words just spill like a glass full of water, it has to go somewhere right?
    But really Donna, I appreciate your following of my writing and it gives me hope that their are good people out in the reality of the ‘real’ world.

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