Children of the Stars
Children of the Stars belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry !, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Midnight Ramblers, The beauty of poetry, The New Beat Generation and Vibration in Art and Verse - VAVoom!Cruel indigenous tortures
Creep sleepily
Through eerie shades of morning
Romantic realisations
Temptations
She is touching these deep run waters
And her touch
Marble smooth
Glides across me
Silken words caress
Like cashmere
She breathes, the world sighs
Love to catch the moon cry
Silently crying
Over her
Now, morning charges forth, a golden army
A charlatan whispers manufactured fairytales
to desperate darkness,
Where silent audiences rustle applause through
breeze blown leaves
Children of night
Children of morning
Children of the twilight hour
Come, join us
Our sweet mortal follies
Our human frailties
Dark, among the stars.
butchart
wow.. amazingly beautiful visuals…. you do more than sling words… you create linguistic paintings…Now, morning charges forth, a golden army
A charlatan whispers manufactured fairytales
to desperate darkness,
Where silent audiences rustle applause through
breeze blown leaves
absolutely gorgeous…... bravo…....b
Wordslinger
Thank you for the support butch. much appreciated.
Lisa Jewell
Sigh
I was completely swept up in the haunting imagery. Sublime writing you’ve captured the essence of the human condition.
Wordslinger replied
Thanks Lisa, I was kind of haunted when I wrote it ;)
Nascha
To me this is like some misty morning play taking place in a forest…..I coul feel the love angst. Wonderful imagery. xx
Wordslinger replied
Hey Jane, I’m glad you could feel it, I try and convey the emotion in the things I write. Thanks for commenting.
linaji
I am so glad you are here.. your vibe is right in sync with your heart and this piece reaches out and touches me . Great writing friend.
Wordslinger
Thanks linaji, Glad to be here. Thanks again for the invitation. I appreciate the support. :)
Matt Penfold
Blog RELEASE ≈ TOMORROW!
Wordslinger replied
Hey Matt thanks for the feature! I feel extremely honoured.
sandra22
Wordslinger (a fabulous name too)
Wonderful standout lines for me…congrats…sandra xx
“She breathes, the world sighs. Love to catch the moon cry”
Wordslinger replied
Hi Sandra, thanks for the great comments of encouragement.
ambient-1
Wow! Just dreamy and lovely imagery! Congratulations on your feature! Love this work!
Wordslinger replied
Thanks ambient-1, I appreciate you kind words.
lawrie .
YEt another fantastic piece, and CONGRATS on the feature, that is such a big thing so soon, shows how good your work is dude….....
Wordslinger replied
Many thanks Lawrie, for your continued support. It means a lot bro.
msdebbie
Congrats on the well-deserved features Wordslinger! You’ve caught the attention of both Vavoom and Midnight Ramblers. My fav line in this was A charlatan whispers manufactured fairytales – really evocative phrasing I thought xoxo
Wordslinger replied
Hey there msdebbie, thank you for your wonderful comments. And to have this piece featured again is an awesome honour. I feel extremely privileged.
jim marshal
That was some very evocative poetry. Nicely done my friend.
Wordslinger replied
Thanks man. I’m glad you liked it.
Straysod
Wonderful piece!
Especially liked the the last few lines – like romantic Nietzschean prose…
Well done.
Wordslinger
Hey there Straysod, glad you liked the piece. Thanks for the encouragement.
Kristin Reynolds
you have no idea how much I relate to this; being that I consider myself a child of the stars…they flood the earth to learn; why else would any come to this most beautufl, and heavy rock? amazing; you are a new fave for me. :) love, K xo
Wordslinger replied
Hey Kristin, thanks for the compliment :) Yeah there are mysteries out there in those little lights that we are yet to unlock and they connect us all.
Christie Moses
I could feel this in my soul. Its magical writing. I consider myself more a lady of the moon ;) but the stars are captivating aren’t they? As is this write. Yep you rock :D xoxo
Wordslinger replied
This particular piece is kind of special to me for various reasons. It was one of those times I felt really connected with the universe. You rock too Moon Lady ;)
hsien-ku
passionate and midnightdark writing. be grateful you can feel so deeply. many have lost that ability. very beautiful poem.
Wordslinger replied
Yeah I do feel grateful for that hsien-ku. I was always better at writing it down than expressing it in other ways. Thanks for your time :)