A new world I will create
Inpiration hit me as i watch Futurama haha
A new world I will create belongs to the following groups:
All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Core [C.O.R.E] and Freedom to ShineA new world I will create….
From the ashes of the old I begin to fashion a notion of peace. A place for things to become. No limits set, nor fates conceived. They will be and they will love if only for me.
Light it starts, things flow and grow. Humanities presence unnoticed for an era. But antinomian among the few always bring about something new.
I gaze, precognition furrowing my brows as things start to change. Dark turn the clouds which spread and consume, constructs of man poking through the atmosphere gasping air. The green fades, giving way to bright hot spots of space-devouring life.
Over the throbbing of this new, dark worlds pulse, voices start to emerge. Tiny in sound but colossal in quantity. They want. They beg. They need. ‘Help’ they ask, help from above.
Races apart but with a universal whim they bespeak their will. I take a closer look and acknowledge the rank stench of another world gone wrong. Give them what they want I shall, ever the cordial being.
Populace increases and life begins to shorten, there is no more room. Language dies, there is no need to ask anymore, all is known. Down come the riches and up go the prices. ‘Is this what you wanted?’
Breathing in the toxicity of their mistakes, humanities decisions make me ill. Solidified the world is, but a liquid of desire and greed thins the morals and purpose of the precious little good left in it.
Crumpling this notion like a scrap piece of paper marked with mistakes, I toss it away and begin anew.
Narcissus17
obviously, because of context, i think this your new best piece ;p
also, are you in a group called freedom to shine? They’re holding a little contest for short love stories and poems. It’s ever so cute. (irrelevant)
And, thanks, i now know what antimonian means ~ cheers
Kym Smitt replied
Haha, i happen to see that word somewhere and was looking for an excuse to use it lol. Yeah i added this to that group, enter it into the comp you reckon? i might. Thanks a heap for your feedback Adam. Always a pleasure :)
JonoCarrick
wow!
Erika .
Brilliant, Kym!
I love this line:
Crumpling this notion like a scrap piece of paper marked with mistakes, I toss it away and begin anew.
Kym Smitt replied
Thanks Erika i really loved writing this one lol
Cassey
Kym, build it and they will come. If only it was that easy. Excellent my friend, excellent.
Kym Smitt replied
Cheers buddy :)
Ushna Sardar
Kym Smitt replied
Wow thanks so much again :)
JonoCarrick
Congratulations Mr. Smitt.
Kym Smitt replied
Thanks so much Jono, mwah
PaulBartley
Very intreging :) love it
Kym Smitt replied
Thanks heaps paul :)
Emmahleee
This is really something Kym.
You have a true gift
Kym Smitt replied
YOu know you have a gift too Emma, love your stuff.