When first we meet
For some special people in my life :)
When first we meet belongs to the following groups:
All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Core [C.O.R.E], Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Everyday Life, Freedom to Shine, Gay Men and Something To SayYou remind me of him
You step out of the page
Modelesque in every way
Charm and confidance oozing
Photoshoped ripples and bulges flaunt intent
I want it
I need it
But I resist
Futility borne of lust
Its flaws that give us character
The conduit for chemistry to flow
Imperfections lacking
I see through
Sparkling gold plated over rust
The ultimate embodiment of Westernized perfection
A bit like the former you
Bathing me in compliments
The walls guarding my heart start to crack
He likes the things about me that no one else does
I’m confusing him with you
An empty and quickly passing phase of desire
I close my eyes
The real you appears
I will not be assimilated into your history
I want to be your future
Not your past
A first and a hundredth
Dissolves into nothing
I will not be a number
Nor you to me
Forget where we have come from
We are here
We are now
No longer in quiet desperation
The nots of each others lives unravel
Longing gone
We are happy
We’re in love
We are complete
This is how it should be
Will be
When first we meet
JonoCarrick
Wow! This is so incredible. Beautiful and wise. You have a gift there Kym.
Kym Smitt replied
Thank you so much Jono, it brought about a tear as i re-read it back to myself lol too much emotion bottled up i suspect
Erika .
Beautiful and breathtaking. I agree with Jono, you have a gift. :)
Kym Smitt replied
Ooooh thank you Erika, it means so much that you guys say that :)
JonoCarrick
aww the little watering rock. hehe
Kym Smitt replied
Haha my new name :) I accept it with relish
Cassey
It is beautiful and you are too.
I will not be assimilated into your history
I want to be your future
YES! Perfect lines.
Kym Smitt replied
Thanks bud comes from the heart :)
Narcissus17
this seems your most emotional piece, Kym, i was intrigued to read. brill’!
Kym Smitt replied
Thanks mr. Came out in one big hit, took about 10 minutes to write lol wierd huh
MistressZombie
Kym this is brilliant! Wow! Wow! Wow!
Kym Smitt replied
I really liked writing this, most of it on the hour drive home from work, holding the steering wheel with my legs while i typed away half of it on my phone as it came into my head :)
butchart
some wonderful imagery and excellent writing…. this flows really well… and contains light from the soul…........ bravo….....b
Kym Smitt replied
Really, thank you Butch. I really enjoy your stuff. I’m still new to all this but perfection doesn’t come easily, actually i dont believe it comes at all. Rejoice in my imperfections :) Glad you like it Butch
Emmahleee
This is magnificent work.
I love the way you write, you certainly have a gift with words.
Well done my friend. Well done
Kym Smitt replied
Thank you so much Emma, i really enjoy reading your stuff
BiographyofRed8
I wonder why I don’t see your poetry come up on my watch list page ? Also I hope you have an excellent holiday.. and this is just amazing and complex, like life and love!!
Kym Smitt replied
thanks bio, i appreciate you being here :)
PaulBartley
WoW kym very intence you have sucked me in in many ways i cant stop reading everything you have written i have even saved alot to notepad and printed them out you have more than a gift….
Kym Smitt replied
Haha oh Paul your sucking me in i gotta say. Thank you so much, there are so many wonderful understated and underestimated artists on this site. I have made some awesome and really close friends on here too, all of which are so brilliant in their own way. Your so welcome to be here :)
ZacharyHS
This is lovely mate =D. Keep it up!
Kym Smitt replied
Cheers Zach, like writing this one
ZacharyHS
It’s okay mate and well as from what i can see we both have what many people would die for.
I’ll be looking out for future pieces such as this. Zachary =D
Cassey
Just passing through. Lol. Mwah!
Kym Smitt replied
Love having you stop by Cass. Especially here, it your place as much as mine