The Battle

Kym Smitt
Author: Kym Smitt
Word Count: 470
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The Battle

Tell me something funny hes sais. This is the fruit borne of your request Cass lol

The Battle belongs to the following groups:

All Out Emotion, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Beginner's Expressions, Core [C.O.R.E], Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Everyday Life, Freedom to Shine and Something To Say

It’s a hot Summers day. One of those ones you despise, for stepping foot outside even for a moment leads to a mass-drenching of clothes and hair. The humidity glues them to your body. So thick in the air you could almost lick the drops of moisture out of the rare and wispy currents of wind. Unfortunately, as this keeps us weak mortal beings indoors, it also drives the unspeakable horrors that live out in the wild bush and damp underground dens to roam for a place of cool. Doors are no obstacle, a lock being as useless as a water pistol against a fire breathing dragon. Up and into the house they come. Searching, hungering for a place to cool the weary body. Into my room one creeps, and that’s when I see it. Death incarnate.

Legs sprouting from every possible angle. Its steadfast body armour like a knights, keeping the vulnerable soft parts safely encased within. Six of its highly intelligent eyes scan me for the kill. I hear its whispers, “Closer, come closer. You will make a fine meal for my babies unborn”. The venom of its words working magic on my muscles, leaving me paralysed and disabling my mind.

Blood curdling chills start to run up my spine, rendering themselves alive through the sharp piercing squeals that issue from my lips. I must show no fear! For it will attack. A weapon is all I need. I reach out for my saviour, my Excalibur, to slay the mighty beast. I’m prepared to strike with the full force and whole 600mls of the can! Making full use of its extra reach tip to get into areas that prey should not go near. I flail wildly for it, just out of my grasp. I begin to hear a guttural, keening sound coming from close-by. The neighbours cat maybe? No it’s coming from me! The precipitation of my utter fear. My impending doom if I don’t do something quickly.

It senses the proximity of my panic. Lunging forwards with all its power. Its primal intent written plainly in its actions. My flight of fight response kicks in just in time. I take what seems a suicidal step towards the raging creature and grab hold of the only thing that can liberate me from this battle. I spray! I spray so hard the face of the monster turns white. Halting its rapid progress as the poison I inflict starts to be absorbed. It turns, bow-legged and lost. Scrambling for a place to hide and recover. Out of my room it scurries. I have won! I bested the beast.

But little do I know. Its brethren army converges. Doom approaches oblivious to the loss of a single unit. It hunts for respite. It hunts for what is mine!

  • Kym Smitt

    Kym Smitt

    Fear….......Its such a raw emotion. One many try to conquer. I fear many things but one that allways gets the better of me is Spiders. I cringle just typing that word. So i ask people of Bubble land, What are you afraid of?

  • Emmahleee

    Emmahleee

    WOW.
    You writw with such PASSION

    you have such emotion and i love what u write

    dont stop writing

    x

  • Cassey

    Cassey

    I wanted to save you from the ferocious beast, but I couldn’t see through the tears…..of laughter. I know you have that high pitch scream squeal damsel in distress thing going on, right? Hahaha. Omg you’re such a keeper (even if you think I sound like an American porn star).

    Of what I fear…The He’s, with every ounce of my being!

  • Cassey

    Cassey

    Oh yea, I loved this!

  • Kym Smitt replied

    Ha! You make me luagh Cass, but you also make me cry! Oh and i so didnt mean it like that. Deep down i think thats where it comes from haha man i cant stop luaghing! Im afraid that title has stuck, atleast till i find abetter one for you. Thanks for the comment bro

  • Narcissus17

    Narcissus17

    pft, i realise we don’t get them as robust in England, but spiders? lol. They’re creeping crawling chaos, huh

  • Kym Smitt replied

    Yeah i realise all i had to do was step forward and squish him beneath my bulk but that wouldn’t make for a good tale now would it.

  • Narcissus17

    Narcissus17

    no, sir :D

  • JonoCarrick

    JonoCarrick

    you are amazing!!!!!!! hahaha I loved this.

  • Kym Smitt replied

    Awww thanks Jono, allways like tohear your comments. Also any tips to keep those monsters away 0_o you wish to share would be welcome. I hear there are over 3000 species in South Africa.

  • MistressZombie

    MistressZombie

    This was bloody hilarious! Awww Lubeboy screams like a girl. It is okay, as long as you still drink like a man and pee standing up.

  • Kym Smitt replied

    I do and i do haha, but my bf, now i can’t speak for him.

  • solareclips~Julie  Alexander

    solareclips~Ju...

    Fabulous writing Kym…. I know to many that are terrified of spiders and can relate 100% to this! I have to chuckle though, because I have seen grown men (my hubby for one) cower and scream like children when spiders come near! :)

  • Kym Smitt replied

    Ha, thanks for the comment. It’s so true though

  • solareclips~Julie  Alexander
  • Kym Smitt replied

    Ohhh thats so cool Thank you so much. I looked but can’t see it there?

  • PaulBartley

    PaulBartley

    yeah spiders is my fear. so well put tother :) i can`t stop reading your writing love it :)

  • Kym Smitt replied

    Haha im so happy you cant stop, soon you will know me inside out 0_o haha great man, cheers

  • Ushna Sardar
  • Kym Smitt replied

    Yay cheers so much Ushna, once again.

  • Cassey

    Cassey

    Congratulations on your new feature.

  • Kym Smitt replied

    Thanks my sweet lil bro :)

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