Blue Moon
Just a little bit of writing, just thought id have another go…..
Silently diamond’s twinkle
Under a velvet sky
Bathed in your light
The bringer of dreams
You call to me
I reach out through crystal tears
Your icy breath whisps through the trees
Across this lonely hill
You whisper to me
Secrets
A language i understand
For I can live without her warmth
Through the darkness i seek your light
Night
Suzanne German
Witheringmoon – this is delightfully gorgeous!
love it – Suzanne x
David Meacham
Hi Kelly – I’ve tried three times to read this poem and been disturbed by phones and people knocking on the door however I came back so it must be good – think there’s a compliment in there somewhere gal :-)
Nicholas Averre
Beautifull piece of writing Kelly. Nice one.
Tony Elliott
Please keep writing now you have started. Evocative prose like this is worth reading.
Trish Cooper
elly this is fantastic !!!! Grreat jog—you go girl!!!! HUGS!!!
Anthony Hedger
lovely Kelly so good
RichiesArt
Disturbing – though somehow persuasive!.
Matt Roberts
I like it :)
Sean Farragher
well done
MunificentChild
I am not trying to be obsequious, but I absolutely adore this poem.
Truely a masterpiece or words.
You are a beautiful artist.
I am a new fan.
Kerry McFarland
So beautiful, WM. Nice to see you up here again!
awsiv
so abstract!!