Dark Embrace

mlgkats, 5 months ago

nicely written

Madeline M. A..., 5 months ago

Very lovely , well done !

Craig Shillington, 5 months ago

Beautiful Kelly, reminds me of a sunset!!

Graham Dean, 5 months ago

I enjoy reading every line, and a brilliant image to accompany.

Sean Farragher, 5 months ago

well done

Zenia Washington, 5 months ago

this poem is wonderful, it’s my type of writing

Mister, 5 months ago

Great. But why did I read the last line as ‘I dark the embrace’ – think I have dyslexia… lol.

Martin Derksema, 5 months ago

One of your most impressive pictures and a beautiful poem.

Max Gatrell, 5 months ago

Nice.

bonesisgreat, 5 months ago

Know just how you feel

Ben Ruskin, 5 months ago

absolutely fantastic..

oscarelizondo, 5 months ago

A brave way to hide behind begin afraid. I just loved it.

oscarelizondo, 5 months ago

A brave way to hide behind begin afraid. I just loved it.

delbertnagel, 5 months ago

very deep, loe in the dark do we see the light

delbertnagel, 5 months ago

i didn’t know 35 words could say so much

moquitako, 5 months ago

breathing, seeing, calling … all giving back less than breathed, seen, called : calling becoming a lullaby, there is restless, quietless air … breathing, becoming suffocation, again air darkness instead of life giving sought after essences … This is very beautiful, for the poem incorporates our being not with what we are forced to accept but with what we agree to be become .. to see through it, to know it because we have embraced what it really is, become wise and alive. This is just very good. Written with effortless flair of a real poet.

Melody Elizabe..., 4 months ago

i really like reading this. it gives me hope for the yet to come.

9TyLeRAuStIN9, 4 months ago

my perspective is you are sad, that makes me feel sad, but i like your work it is very good to me

WitheringMoon, 4 months ago

Wow thanx all – such wonderful comments was my first ever attempt at writting and will probably be my last !!! thanx all xx

bubblegumPOP, 4 months ago

So poetic, its very beautiful..
I could read it a million times and never get sick of it =]

WitheringMoon, 4 months ago

Thank you bubblexx

byebye, 4 months ago

Beautiful, this was written very well.

Ushna Sardar, 4 months ago

awesome!

Sszuch, 4 months ago

I like this poem alot. Don’t stop writing… these words touch me.

WitheringMoon, 4 months ago

Thanx byebye,Ushna & Shanna x

andreamcarroll, 4 months ago

i love this.
it’s very well written.

WitheringMoon, 4 months ago

thankyou andream

EricSimmons, 4 months ago

nice very abstarct and dark…

dogpriest, 4 months ago

really good, i enjoyed this poem. keep it up.

Maureen Bloesch, 4 months ago

sadness inside, well written, touched a soft part of my heart…
How did you get your photo on the side?

Rob Smith, 4 months ago

Love

it

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Raven088, 4 months ago

I could not help but read the words over and over again.. Deep and beautiful.

Dave Legere, 4 months ago

I like the simplicity! very good.

KEITH R. WILL..., 4 months ago

very well written

Bradley Hartman, 4 months ago

Has the feel of a rainbow caught at dusk as the many colors start to lose their brilliance. Very well written.

WitheringMoon, 4 months ago

Thank you x