Breathing Deeply,
Drowning slowly.
Seen by all,
Heard by none
Her call
A lullaby in a storm
The sea couldn’t charm
The sky can’t hold
Im have no fear
I embrace the dark
Dark Embrace

Breathing Deeply,
Drowning slowly.
Seen by all,
Heard by none
Her call
A lullaby in a storm
The sea couldn’t charm
The sky can’t hold
Im have no fear
I embrace the dark

mlgkats, 5 months ago
nicely written
Madeline M. A..., 5 months ago
Very lovely , well done !
Craig Shillington, 5 months ago
Beautiful Kelly, reminds me of a sunset!!
Graham Dean, 5 months ago
I enjoy reading every line, and a brilliant image to accompany.
Sean Farragher, 5 months ago
well done
Zenia Washington, 5 months ago
this poem is wonderful, it’s my type of writing
Mister, 5 months ago
Great. But why did I read the last line as ‘I dark the embrace’ – think I have dyslexia… lol.
Martin Derksema, 5 months ago
One of your most impressive pictures and a beautiful poem.
Max Gatrell, 5 months ago
Nice.
bonesisgreat, 5 months ago
Know just how you feel
Ben Ruskin, 5 months ago
absolutely fantastic..
oscarelizondo, 5 months ago
A brave way to hide behind begin afraid. I just loved it.
oscarelizondo, 5 months ago
A brave way to hide behind begin afraid. I just loved it.
delbertnagel, 5 months ago
very deep, loe in the dark do we see the light
delbertnagel, 5 months ago
i didn’t know 35 words could say so much
moquitako, 5 months ago
breathing, seeing, calling … all giving back less than breathed, seen, called : calling becoming a lullaby, there is restless, quietless air … breathing, becoming suffocation, again air darkness instead of life giving sought after essences … This is very beautiful, for the poem incorporates our being not with what we are forced to accept but with what we agree to be become .. to see through it, to know it because we have embraced what it really is, become wise and alive. This is just very good. Written with effortless flair of a real poet.
Melody Elizabe..., 4 months ago
i really like reading this. it gives me hope for the yet to come.
9TyLeRAuStIN9, 4 months ago
my perspective is you are sad, that makes me feel sad, but i like your work it is very good to me
WitheringMoon, 4 months ago
Wow thanx all – such wonderful comments was my first ever attempt at writting and will probably be my last !!! thanx all xx
bubblegumPOP, 4 months ago
So poetic, its very beautiful..
I could read it a million times and never get sick of it =]
WitheringMoon, 4 months ago
Thank you bubblexx
byebye, 4 months ago
Beautiful, this was written very well.
Ushna Sardar, 4 months ago
awesome!
Sszuch, 4 months ago
I like this poem alot. Don’t stop writing… these words touch me.
WitheringMoon, 4 months ago
Thanx byebye,Ushna & Shanna x
andreamcarroll, 4 months ago
i love this.
it’s very well written.
WitheringMoon, 4 months ago
thankyou andream
EricSimmons, 4 months ago
nice very abstarct and dark…
dogpriest, 4 months ago
really good, i enjoyed this poem. keep it up.
Maureen Bloesch, 4 months ago
sadness inside, well written, touched a soft part of my heart…
How did you get your photo on the side?
Rob Smith, 4 months ago
Love
it
.
Raven088, 4 months ago
I could not help but read the words over and over again.. Deep and beautiful.
Dave Legere, 4 months ago
I like the simplicity! very good.
KEITH R. WILL..., 4 months ago
very well written
Bradley Hartman, 4 months ago
Has the feel of a rainbow caught at dusk as the many colors start to lose their brilliance. Very well written.
WitheringMoon, 4 months ago
Thank you x