Dark Embrace

Very lovely , well done !

Beautiful Kelly, reminds me of a sunset!!

I enjoy reading every line, and a brilliant image to accompany.

well done

this poem is wonderful, it’s my type of writing

Great. But why did I read the last line as ‘I dark the embrace’ – think I have dyslexia… lol.

One of your most impressive pictures and a beautiful poem.

Nice.

Know just how you feel

absolutely fantastic..

A brave way to hide behind begin afraid. I just loved it.

A brave way to hide behind begin afraid. I just loved it.

very deep, loe in the dark do we see the light

i didn’t know 35 words could say so much

breathing, seeing, calling … all giving back less than breathed, seen, called : calling becoming a lullaby, there is restless, quietless air … breathing, becoming suffocation, again air darkness instead of life giving sought after essences … This is very beautiful, for the poem incorporates our being not with what we are forced to accept but with what we agree to be become .. to see through it, to know it because we have embraced what it really is, become wise and alive. This is just very good. Written with effortless flair of a real poet.

i really like reading this. it gives me hope for the yet to come.

my perspective is you are sad, that makes me feel sad, but i like your work it is very good to me

Wow thanx all – such wonderful comments was my first ever attempt at writting and will probably be my last !!! thanx all xx

So poetic, its very beautiful..
I could read it a million times and never get sick of it =]

Thank you bubblexx

Beautiful, this was written very well.

awesome!

I like this poem alot. Don’t stop writing… these words touch me.

Thanx byebye,Ushna & Shanna x

i love this.
it’s very well written.

thankyou andream

nice very abstarct and dark…

really good, i enjoyed this poem. keep it up.

sadness inside, well written, touched a soft part of my heart…
How did you get your photo on the side?

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I could not help but read the words over and over again.. Deep and beautiful.

I like the simplicity! very good.

very well written

Has the feel of a rainbow caught at dusk as the many colors start to lose their brilliance. Very well written.

Thank you x