A glimpse

God love your heart, bless and keep you…

Thanks again for sharing your unique perspective. Its a lesson to us all…

Your Amazing!

Thank you for your big heart and your strong ability to focus under pressure :)

Very powerful well done

Incredibly emotive…well done.

keep it coming when you get home put your work into a book and let me know so i can buy a copy
take care
Your a Saint
keep the faith
dsart

Great writing. Congrats on being one of the In The Moment winners. Well deserved.

wow breaking news! well done indeed!!!

a glimpse 4 us and the whole thing is played in front of you with such starkness 24/7

very emotional… Thank You for all that you do!!

honest emotion….simple yet chaotic. Well written. We love you and everything you do for us and for the freedom of others!

honest emotion….simple yet chaotic. Well written. We love you and everything you do for us and for the freedom of others!

Takes a certain kind of person to do such job and function under pressures as such. So good there are those like you can put real action into words to convey to the world what really goes on. You convey your thoughts well, and have admirable quality. In thought and prayer for protection in your duties and safe, peaceful, speedy return home.

GBU hun

i love this, it is personal and that is what the best poetry is, personal

Well said. Was it choice A or Coice B that sent you. I am sure all the dead had a choice in it too.

What a powerful wonderful woman you are…we are all so proud of you. Sally xxoo

I loved your writing! Us veterans have to stick together! if u need anything just say the word!

SEMPER FI!

Thank you for sharing you heart, this is powerful… as many have said. God Bless you!

Powerful, thought provoking words. We take so much for granted over here. My son was in the marines for 7 years, he’s been out for 3 years now. Thank you for your service in the military, and for sharing with us here. Take care.

I admire your strength and courage…. wish more people were as thoughtfull and caring as you are..

First of all, thank you for sharing your poetry, I wish there were more people who did what you do, as far as writing about their experiences. It was very moving, but detatched at the same time, it took me there, as far as feeling what you must feel. Keep writing and sharing. Love it!

very powerful, descriptive and to the point. You have an amazing insight. God Bless and Safe journey home.

godd stuff

As a disabled veteran, this touched me deeply. I want so much for everyone to come back home to their friends and families!

Again – well done.

powerful. keep it strong solider. I hope god keeps you safe and you get to come home again

God bless you! Stay strong and know that we are proud of you all!

WOW, that’s deep! Great job!

Hey that was absolutely amazing. I’ve written alot about the war and how I feel about politics, ect… But this tells a tale from the inside! Your words were amazing, I could almost picture every moment of this event. I think I’ll favorite this

great job, extremely powerful

nice.

I don’t like to lose, but life is stranger than fiction, and reality is always a more interesting
story. Congratulations. God bless you and may he watch over, and protect you. Take care of your beautiful self alright? “To live in the moment” was my poem for this group,”Elemental Mental” for
Gaia The Living planet, and “A Perfect World” in the Challenge cafe group are a few of my pieces.
Check them out and give me some feedback champ! Your #1

Thanks for the insight. This is a great piece. You watch yourself over there, buddy…

Congratulations! Well done.

I love the rhythm and the really tight writing style – gives a sense of “being there” and focus, despite being about chaotic events. I enjoyed it very much.

Perhaps an obvious comparison, but it reminds me in some ways of the film MASH …

Wow. Amazing, and God bless you.

Great work – powerful – demands attention

I know the feeling of being in it and you have captured it well

powerful images… thank you

The images are very powerful for me. My son is serving in Iraq and this sounds like were he is. God Bless all of you. May God keep you in his grace.

the words of familiar….
hubby was in Afghanistan, Kabul, Bishkek…
God Bless…...Stay safe…

i’ve visualized your words in my head…
traumatized to say the least.
what can you do to stay sane in the midst of caos?
when i think my day is going bad i’ll think of you now.

Thank you for all you are doing for us back here at home. Be safe and keep writing, your poem shows the dark reality that is war and in a small way shows us a bit of the terror you have to exist in. You have the hearts of every American who are in your debt

war is hell

be well