Cloud 9 ..................
These words came to me as I was travelling along the motorway through an horrendous storm this morning…. 14 November 2009
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Twisted and whirled
Then……..
Unceremoniously plummeted
Back down to earth
Trenchtownrock 25 days ago
I hate when that happens…the good thing about coming down is that you get to go backup again.
wigs replied 25 days ago
yes, when you’re down the only way is up….. and you can only go up if you want to and the recoery time is up to you as well….
jennielove 25 days ago
oh, how i can relate.
this is great. it’s simple, but can have so much meaning. so many thoughts and ideas can and have branched from this basic concept of being lifted so high and then dropped like a cinder block.
great write =]
wigs replied 25 days ago
thank you jennie…..
kevinmawson 25 days ago
Welcome back to earth Helen!
km.
wigs replied 25 days ago
thank you Kevin, it was just a short trip to the moon lol
Shelly Hiebert 25 days ago
Short and to the point and oh so true!
wigs replied 25 days ago
I was kind of pleased more words didn’t spring to mind as I’d never have remembered them…. xx
Tanya N 25 days ago
Back down to earth … with a bang ... but the swirling and whirling bit was fun for a while :)
wigs replied 25 days ago
absolutely, I don’t know anyone who gets unhappy in cloud 9, but what i do know is that you’re never there forever….at point you return to reality
msdebbie 25 days ago
I am so impressed that your mind wandered to such a fantastic place when something as mundane as being stuck in traffic happened – kudos wigs xoxo
wigs replied 25 days ago
debbie, my mind wanders off at the strangest of times, but fortunately I was not driving at the time, just a passenger whose mind wandered…..it was the awful weather that bought me back to earth…
Matt Roberts 25 days ago
Really good write. Short but very, very good :)
wigs replied 25 days ago
thank you so much Matt
sandra22 25 days ago
a beautiful expression of ‘cloud 9’ ...reality seems the place to be (for me) :))
This is lovely …..sandra
wigs replied 25 days ago
no you’re right Sandra, I think we all experience cloud 9 at some point, but we’re never there forever, some plummet back down to earth and some drift, but we all come back….and maybe return another time, its just one of lifes little cycles, what goes up must come down…
andy tetlow 24 days ago
beautiful words during tempestuous weather..wonderful. xx
wigs replied 24 days ago
thanks Andy….... it strange how lines come to me ….pleased you liked xx
warmsoul 24 days ago
Beautiful
wigs replied 17 days ago
thank you x
ShadowDancer 22 days ago
man i so know this feeling… my stormy moods seem to match your weather. xx
wigs replied 22 days ago
ah thank you…..