Resisting Seduction.....

Author: wigs
Word Count: 64
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Resisting Seduction.....

My second free write this week…....

Thank you for taking the time to read my work, it is always much appreciated.

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Resisting Seduction..... belongs to the following groups:

! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , Feminine Intent (LIMIT TWO IMAGES PER DAY), Midnight Ramblers, The beauty of poetry, The Red Writing Room, THE SISTERHOOD, Up & Coming Writers, WMG and Writing: Persuing Happiness

As he ran his finger
Down her body
From the nape of her neck
To the small of her back
He had no idea
Of the awareness
He was awakening
Senses tingling
Erotic thoughts provoking
As she lay there still
Revelling
In the moment
Absorbing the sensation
Resisting temptation
For retaliation
Savouring the impression
Of his sensual action
Until she relinquishes
To his passion

Christie Moses 17 days ago

OH wow! this is so sensual and tingling :) A beautiful write xox
wigs replied 16 days ago

Thank you Christie, you know I posted this just before bed and woke up thinking I need to work a bit more on it and can’t believe the responses…just amazed, seems I don’t need to rewrite as it has 6 favs, 59 views and loads of lovely comments…. thank you so much for you lovely words xx
oscarelizondo 17 days ago

Boy, now I understand why a woman uses a fan in her hand to blow the air onto her face. LOL Very pleasantly romantic to entice the senses within oneself. Sweet approach that almost makes it seem refreshing and innocent, yea, right.LOL Really nice to read, thanks for sharing wondering insight.
wigs replied 16 days ago

Ah well of course Oscar I am of course I am refreshing and innocent…lol thank you for reading and your lovely comments
Shelly Hiebert 17 days ago

I got goosebumps just from the first sentence Helen! And then “He had no idea of the awareness he was awakening”.....funny what a simple touch can stir. This is delicious Helen and I say you stick with this free writing for awhile because it seems to really work for you :)
wigs replied 16 days ago

thats so kind of you Shelly… and there’s me thinking I needed to pull it off and work on it a bit more…. which I wont as it has a few favs…. thank you so much xxx
skinnyman 17 days ago

very nice feeling this wigs :)
wigs replied 16 days ago

I hope so skinnyman…. x
raymondoantonio 17 days ago

WIGS, BACK TICKLING AND TINGLING!! AH SWEET SURRENDER!! X
wigs replied 16 days ago

very sweet surrender…. thank you Ray xx
happyfeet5 17 days ago

Ahhhh, yes. Relinquishing all of the sensation and just savoring it as long as you can until your surrender. Beautifully, erotically written. Iris
wigs replied 16 days ago

Thank you Iris….. resisting temptation until your on fire…. nice feeling
Cassidy JK (Ra... 17 days ago

Giving in to what we feel without overthinking is difficult sometimes. This is so full of eroticsm packed into a nice little package of a write.
wigs replied 16 days ago

Thank you….. sometimes its best not to get into too much detail and leave the readers own imagination to flow
Rhenastarr 17 days ago

Fabulous writing my friend, a sensual journey for sure.
wigs replied 16 days ago

Ah thank you…. you’re so kind x
Trenchtownrock 17 days ago

This is wonderful my friend..love the burning fingers in this piece.
wigs replied 16 days ago

You’re so kind, thank you
Mudsoldat 17 days ago

hey Wigs’ter…you’ve started a series of this couple me thinks…so what happens next…i reckon where all sitting here wondering now…thats just not fair man!!! :))) i see sun and warm skin and slight private smile under pillowed, blanketed hair as eyes see thru his fingers her body jewells…all breathtaking and glorious she…so soft a moment you have us seeing. Lovely. Mudman
wigs replied 16 days ago

Well Mr Mudman… we shall have to see about a sequel….. best I have a little think…nice idea, thank you x
Kristin Reynolds 16 days ago

yummy lady. really stirring poetry. ;)
wigs replied 16 days ago

Thank you Kristin…....
ShadowDancer 13 days ago

i love that you were able to be seductive without getting overly descriptive… focusing on the sensations, great job.
wigs replied 12 days ago

thank you….sometimes it’s nicer for the reader to feel/sense what’s happening opposed to seeing, it leaves more for the imagination….. of which most of us are blessed with vivid ones once the right trigger has been pressed….