The Dancing Magpie
I welcome critical reviews of my work…please bubble me if you have any constructive comments….
The Dancing Magpie belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , Bits and Pieces , Freedom to Shine, Midnight Ramblers, The beauty of poetry, Up & Coming Writers and WMGAs the sun rose
in the clear morning sky,
birds flying swiftly
way up high
A breeze gently blowing
singing a soft lullaby
through the trees,
grasses and standing rye
I stopped and watched
a beautiful magpie
dancing on a post
where the seas of poppies lie
Oblivious of his audience
he didn’t appear shy
he looked in high spirits
happily I gave a sigh
Before he took flight
in the clear morning sky
Dragan Petrovic
This is so light and cheerful. What a way to start a day (it’s morning over here)! Thanks!
wigs replied
I was out early Sunday morning… and it was glorious, pleased you like it.
Dragan Petrovic
I can tell. I went for a walk this morning, and it was just as you wrote – glorious. :=)
Bob Williams
very summery. nice one.
wigs replied
Cheers Bob, i was feeling chirpy at the time… Wigs
shaneran
wonderful to be able to express something at once so simple and yet so emotionally uplifting
Love this!!
wigs replied
ah thank you
oscarelizondo
Such a gentle persuasion about the glorious day as you introduce us to the making of a beautiful free spirit as the emotions of the flight of the magpie. It touches us in simpliity with a charming desposition of being in flight inside this birdie because you set the eyes inside of us by using the spirit within the feathered creature of nature. F_A_N_T_A_S_T_I_C work you have created.
wigs replied
thank you…. at the moment it was fresh and clear, and thats where the inspiration came from…i am so pleased you liked it
Amanda Gazidis
Lovely images, well done…
wigs replied
thank you