Parsnips and Olives....
written on Saturday 19 June 2009 at 8am…. over coffee
I welcome critical reviews of my work…please bubble me if you have any constructive comments….
Parsnips and Olives.... belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry !, "Poetry and Beautiful Women" , Everyday Life, Freedom In Words & Art, Freedom to Shine, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Midnight Ramblers, Shameless Self-Promotion, The beauty of poetry, Up & Coming Writers, Who are YOU to Judge?, WMG and Writing: Persuing HappinessIf you were to see me now, crossed legged in my chair
Just crawled out of bed, pj’s on and ruffled hair
I’d offer you coffee, breakfast too, for my home is yours
We’d chat about everything of interest and probably more
You’d see me as I really am, and I’ll tell you as it is
Don’t ask for advice if you don’t want the truth, I say it as it is
This is about me,
and how I really am
Not a made up someone
or some little lost lamb
looking to follow
the truth she can’t swallow
I really don’t like parsnips, struggle with olives too
Other than that I eat really any type of food
I come from a big family so had to learn to share
My sisters hand me downs, too big but did I care!
I’m not materialistic but I like nice things
I hate money, it just ruins everything
I can be selfish, I have been and incredibly naive
Life is for living, at least that’s what I believe
A challenging childhood taught me to appreciate
Life is full of ups and downs and punishment for being late
I take the rough with the smooth, I will survive
Learning from it all, my heart will stay alive
I always thought I was a numbers person, but now I can write
Words soaring round my head, like a bird in free flight
I used to be self conscious about by personal being
Now I love myself, not through vanity but for just being
Skeletons are for the burial ground, so don’t hide them in the closet
I look at myself in the mirror and tell myself to be honest
Happy people make me smile, my friends I truly value
Friendships are easy to find; but only a few will ever be true
My head is full of vivid dreams, shared through night and day
It’s where my creativity was buried; now it’s out to play
My heart has been broken many times, by love given too freely
Alone to long with love still to give, my heart is not yet empty
I have travelled far and wide with excitement and interest
Exploring and searching, a passion my spirit loves best
My mission in life to achieve in what ever I try and do
If I fail its not because I didn’t try, I really can assure you
So if your still here for lunch
we’ll eat as you wish
You can have parsnips and olives
or anything else you prefer on your dish
kevinmawson
LOL’ I love parsnips,Olives i like now and then with salad. An enjoyable breakfast read,Now whats for dinner?
km.
wigs replied
a glass of wine for me….. xx
oneperfectkiss
wow…i really like this wigs…so real…no petence….the best. xxx
wigs replied
thank you its been something playing on my mind for a while to write…. now it’s here… your continual support of my work is much appreciated xx
autumnwind
Honest, revealing and quite beautiful. On parsnips and olives I’m good, but cannot even look at sardines or anchovies. lol. xoxo
wigs replied
thank you… and to be fair i might skip the anchovies too…lol xx
Epazia Espino
giggle, are you sure we are not twins!
wigs replied
spooky eh….. xx
valzart
Aww this is beautiful soulful writing sweetheART love it! yip! I’m there4coffe with ya anytime lol!;} happy hippy hugglez
wigs replied
thank you valzart…. xx
Bob Williams
Nice one wigs! I’ll buy you lunch someday.
wigs replied
so long as its not parsnips or olives….. and i might take you up on that….
Dragan Petrovic
This is great!
wigs replied
thank you Dragan for taking the time to look at my work…. much appreciated
Shoaib .
wow !!!! i loveeeee this one wigs…
quite an insight to the REAL WIGS .. you are such a wonderful person
(and yes i will take some breakfast too ! LOLLL)
wigs replied
sweet….. thank you..xx
Kristin Reynolds
Awesome attitude, lady. :) right on and I, personally, would love to come to your place for whatever you were serving. sounds like fun. :) Kristin
wigs replied
Hi Kristin, thank you
linaji
DEEELIGHTFUL AND FEEL GOOD TOO!
wigs replied
oh thank you… thats wonderful and sooooo very much appreciated…
lazydaze
AWSOME WORK! and CONGRATS with the FEATURE!!
wigs replied
thank you and thank you again… the feature was a lovely surprise
skinnyman
lovely open piece wigs, the only way to be really. Live life, love life:)
wigs replied
cheers skinnyman… and i do and will
shaneran
congratulations on your feature!! Is this describing you? I love this and this writing makes me want to get to know this person. She sounds fun and spunky and honest and not afraid to share what she has. Great writing!!
wigs replied
Shaneran, thank you for taking so much time to look at my work… it’s very much appreciated and you comments are wonderful. And yes this is me…I wanted share with everyone the real wigs…. as sometimes the writing can be dark and sad and i’m not in that place now… i happy and having fun with my pictures and writing.
shaneran
That is great!! Glad to know a bit about you!!
Erika .
ah this is so refreshing to read. And I’ll be glad to stay and take some lunch, I’d like a big bowl of spaghetti with lots of tomato sauce and cheese please. ;D xxxx
wigs replied
Ah thank you….
raymondoantonio
Ditto and bravo!!!
wigs replied
Hi and thank you….
Shoaib .
hsien-ku
lovely – honest and strong words!
wigs replied
thank you so much hsein-ku…...