I trusted you....
Sometimes, maybe most times, you are the last to know when they leave that someone else in involved…the shock even when anticipated is often hard to grasp…
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You just get up and walk
What else am I supposed to do?
You don’t want to talk
I suspected there was someone else
Of which you deny
But your friends were not so loyal
Couldn’t keep up with your lies
I trusted you unconditionally
With all of my heart
I just can’t believe
We’re going to be apart
My head is in turmoil
My heart worn to shreds with pain
Tears hurt running down my face
Like ice in the rain
I’m scared and abandoned
How will I cope
Everything in my life
Has been under a microscope
You knew my every move
But me not yours
It appears you could hide anywhere
Even through a glass door
You will do the same to her
Of that I am sure
Let her gain your trust
Then sneak out the back door
The scars you left
Will one day heal
And I will be free to love again
Loose the hatred you make me feel
I’m still sat here long after you’ve gone
Silently stunned and bewildered
The tears slowly drying up
Unable to utter a single word
Shoaib .
very painful and heartbreaking poem wigs but beautifully written… :)
keep smiling !
wigs replied
cheers Shoaib…..always smiling!
Mark Chapman
Powerfull stuff Helen, great work
wigs replied
Hi Mark, thanks….
ChelseaBlue
Another excellent piece Helen
wigs replied
Cheers G
Paul Morley
Reading this brought back a few memories …
wigs replied
I’m sure there are many out there who can relate…. thanks for reading it.
Hannah Fenton-...
This was just featured in
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wigs replied
Oh wow…thank you so much….. I’m speechless and most utterly appreciative, thank you…
DarKarsean
Excellent words – sad but beautiful
wigs replied
Your so kind, thank you
MrHill
very strong, filled with emotions…..thank you wigs….....
wigs replied
Thanks MrHill, it came on reflection of a very emotional time…..
kodzo
A jolly good poem, brings back memories we can all relate to.Deep touch Helen.x
wigs replied
Ah thank you Kodzo…. you’re a sweetie. xx
Richard Veal
Excellent writing Helen.
If this from a personal experience, I hope that things are much better now. x
wigs replied
Hi Richard…. I am pleased you liked it….. an experience a long time ago and well over it, thanks for asking. Wigs x