Isolation

Isolation by Simon Whittaker
Isolation by Simon Whittaker
  • janeymac

    janeymac

    like this great angle , tones and composition good on you !!

  • Simon Whittaker

    Simon Whittaker

    Thanks for that, this style of shot is a bit new for me. I’m glad to get the comment.

  • Tollwut

    Tollwut

    GREAT!

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Hey, I like your stuff. Your nudes are so different from anything I’ve seen before – absolutely great.

  • Simon Whittaker

    Simon Whittaker

    Thanks for that, appreciate it.

  • DavidAmosPhotography

    DavidAmosPhoto...

    Great stuff Simon!! – This is a great still life.

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thanks David, I really appreciate you taking the time to comment. This is the first shot of this kind so your comments mean alot.

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thanks David, now I remember your name – you have the Lensbaby group. Your comment means alot to me – thank you.

  • Alessandro Pinto

    Alessandro Pinto

    lovely composition…beautifully focused ! Great work !

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thank you elbambino, your work and comments have given me an enormous lift and inspiration to push my boundaries and flex my photographic brain.
    Thanks again

  • momma2four

    momma2four

    Cool shot! Nice perspective and selective coloring. I love a good puzzle!

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thank you Christine, I am glad you like it.

  • Normf

    Normf

    Simon you’ve got to do this more often, Great tones and style. I’ll have to talk to you about this!

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thanks Norm, I appreciate it. Would be good to catch up.

  • Matthew Walters

    Matthew Walters

    I like this Simon. The muted colours everywhere other than the drink, the part completed jigsaw and the glasses all work together to give a feeling of loneliness.

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thanks Matthew, I am so glad to hear you say that. Thank you for the feedback – I really appreciate it.

  • Lois Romer

    Lois Romer

    love this shot, so telling yet simple. I am a jigsaw fan asw ell never thought of photographing it, well done.

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thank you Lois, I really appreciate the feedback. The table top faces away from the sun (and between you and I most of my portrait shots are taken using the light from this window) and it gives a good tonal range on the dark wood. See what kind of photo you can do with jigsaw pieces one day and let me know if you like.

  • Micki Ferguson

    Micki Ferguson

    I LOVE these types of pictures

    I do them for myself and don’t ever upload them because I’m too chicken HA HA HA

    I have then on photo.net

    But here I do the mainstream stuff.

    This is wonderful with the dof and the “game theme” I would put it on my wall.

    I would love it in B&W with a slight sepia tone too (all together)

  • Simon Whittaker

    Simon Whittaker

    Wow, thanks for that. You should put your shots on – its a bit nerve wracking but hey – whats the worst that can happen. I didn’t try b&w or sepia with the image because I really liked the muted tones and then the colour in the Bourbon but I will give it a try.
    And thanks for the watch listing and favouriting too, I really appreciate it.

  • Dave Hiskey

    Dave Hiskey

    good shot,simon…like the concept…great colour and angle…for me I would have lifted the highlight tones on the table a tiny bit but thats my view and many would disagree, we are all different , so you keep doing what your doing…nice one

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thanks Dave, I really appreciate the feedback and the compliment. I’ll give that suggestion a shot.

  • BlaizerB

    BlaizerB

    davehiskey has a point and possibly a very slightly tighter crop are all i could suggest – hard to give suggestions on improving an otherwise superb shot. a great stock image too. i really like the edge blur on this and composition. it is full of interest. gr8.
    cheers

  • Simon Whittaker

    Simon Whittaker

    Thanks for that, croppin g is not my strong point I’d have to say so any suggestions are welcome.

  • Von McKnelly

    Von McKnelly

    I was immediately draw into this shot to see what’s going on. Light direction and layout of the props is perfect. A killer story indeed.
    A tighter crop and less on the blur would be my feedback.

  • Simon Whittaker

    Simon Whittaker

    Thanks for that, appreciate the feedback of the crop. Will give it a try.

  • drjones

    drjones

    awesome use of selective colour and soft focus. Love it!

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Wow, thanks for that. I really appreciate the feedback. I have mostly done informal portraits til now but have started to expand creatively so I really, really appreciate the positive feedback.
    Thanks!

  • drjones

    drjones

    You’re welcome. I think you’re going to come up with some stunners by expanding creatively- have fun!

  • Normf

    Normf

    Great responce to this photo Simon. Was the LensBaby used here to get the amazing DOF?

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Yep, been really happy with the response and yep that was with the lensbaby.

  • johnsphotoworks

    johnsphotoworks

    I was going to ask if you used a lensbaby on this shot, then i read it on the right if the image. this is a wonderful shot.

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thank you so much, I really appreciate the comment – especially considering the calibre of your work. Thank you.

  • Mohammad Khaksar

    Mohammad Khaksar

    wow…what a great idea…bravo…bravo my friend…

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thank you so much. It is my first real still life so I am especially pleased you liked it.

  • reflexio

    reflexio

    Love the story entwined in this photo.

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thank you so much, I really appreciate that.

  • Duncan Waldron

    Duncan Waldron

    This is interesting, Simon, especially with the angled approach to lift it out of the ordinary. Have you tried playing with the tones at all? I think you could do something with contrast here, or unsharp masking, to add a bit of punch. Try posterizing with just 2 levels, for a really graphic effect.

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Mate I am useless at photoshop. If it dont come fixed off the camera I am basically lost bar a bit of brightness and contrast. I’ll give it a try, it needs a bit of cropping too but once I take the shot off (even to edit) the comments history and any favouriting is lost too.

  • Duncan Waldron

    Duncan Waldron

    You don’t need to remove the shot; you can either replace it (My Bubble – Art – Edit, then “Change this image…”), or just add a modified one in addition to the original.

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Oh, might give that a go then. Thanks for that.

  • Dragomir Vukovic

    Dragomir Vukovic

    beautiful life

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thanks Dragomir, this is really my first attempt at a still life.

  • Shannon Byous Ruddy

    Shannon Byous ...

    Really tells a story. Good shot!

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thank you Shannon, I am so glad you think so!

  • James Godber

    James Godber

    Hey Simon, love the new avatar and wonder why I didn’t look at this image before. It’s fantastic…..

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thanks so much James, I really appreciate it.

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    P.s. thanks for the favouriting too!

  • Steve Chapple

    Steve Chapple

    Very good outcome. The DOF works so well here, gives a focus on the centre piece of the image with a ‘story’ told by the other items. A top shot…..

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thanks Stephen, I used a lensbaby as a DOF style vignette in a way, they’re a great little peice of equipment.

  • Meeli Sonn

    Meeli Sonn

    Yes, it is good idea to express this way. The composition is great. The men can understand it even better…..

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thank you, I am very flattered.

  • Adam Spence

    Adam Spence

    Very nice, great control of focal point, tone and contrast. Very engaging image.

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thank you so much for the kind words Adam, its much appreciated.

  • Lois  Bryan

    Lois Bryan

    spectacular with the short dof … to me it illustrates the confusion we always bring to puzzles … be they little pieces of colored cardboard or the ones in real life. The selective color of the whiskey (yes?) is hilarious … as it’s soooo much easier and more colorful in life to escape than it is to solve our fuzzy problems!!!!! Or am I reading too much into it???? LOL!!!!! Regardless, I LOVE it!!!

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thanks Lois! No, that was what I wanted to convey in the image, dark and lonely puzzle – life for some. The light caught my idea and I combined it with an old idea. Thanks for favouriting it too. MWAH!

  • colindove

    colindove

    Hi Simon,...”So don’t come knocking,
    I won’t come out.
    This depression is my deepest bout.
    Just leave your message on the door.
    As I call on Jim just one time more. “

    I love the shot, it is perfect for the mood , and as I suffer depression I could have written these last words , as I hide at home quite a bit..even leaving notes on the door…..But darn, they blow off in the wind on occassions.
    Very creative work with photo shot. I love it.
    Colin

  • Cora Wandel

    Cora Wandel

    Wow, there is a writer in you! I thought of you and this group because JerameS submitted a photo this afternoon and I saw you commented on it, and I thought maybe there is a writer in you, too, and to my delight there is! Thank you so much for joining us. This is beautiful, both words and photo. – Cora

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thank you so much, I am so glad you told me about this group – its an inspired group with inspired people.

  • Anne-Marie Bokslag

    Anne-Marie Bok...

    Well composed picture Simon, together with the words it’s perfect ~ Anne-Marie

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thanks so much Anne-Marie, I really appreciate you commenting too.

  • johnsphotoworks

    johnsphotoworks

    I never get tired of looking at this picture. I just love the DOF.

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thanks John, there are a few of my favourites I look at over and over and I’m glad I’ve been able to take a shot you like.

  • Wayne  Pearson

    Wayne Pearson

    Yes this image says so much, the lighting sets the mood as with the alcohol, and the messed up puzzle, sad (mood ) but very effective.

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thanks Wayne, I see lots of lonely people through work and it kind of reminds me of them.

  • faizee

    faizee

    nice work…

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Hey, thanks mate – I really appreciate it.

  • JudyBJ

    JudyBJ

    I’ve looked at your entire potfolio and like it a lot,but this is real special and it goes to my favorites for sure

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thanks Judy, I am glad to hear you liked this shot and thanks for the favouriting. I am hoping to expand my studio work in the very near future and start getting out a bit more.

  • JudyBJ

    JudyBJ

    I’m looking forward to it ,also drooling over your camera,but hope to get the new 5D Mark ii soon

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Ha ha ha, one of my best friends (who is getting out of photography has loaned me the 1D, but I can’t tell you how desperate I am for the new 5D mkII, I hope you get yours too. Have you seen the test photos on DP review?

  • JudyBJ

    JudyBJ

    yes i have and i’m shooting now with the 5D(very happy with it),so it can only get better,specially the dirt problem

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Absolutely!

  • Mohsen Bayramnejad

    Mohsen Bayramn...

    This is just amazing! wow! love the way you compose it this way and your fine use of dof acts as a element for the composiion. also your control on light… very nicely done, and creative ;)

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thanks Moshen, I am glad you like it. I used a Lensbaby for this shot and for “Vows” as well – they are such a great bit of kit.

  • Nicholas Richardson

    Nicholas Richa...

    Great tones again and the light and levels are just right. DOF really makes it. Lensbaby put to perfect use.

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Oh yeah mate they are really cool – so cheap and so effective. I have started using them on portraits too for something different. Thanks for the favouriting too mate!

  • colindove

    colindove

    Great work as I have commented before, it is an image that opens my inner self..good work Simon
    Colin

  • colindove

    colindove

    Great work as I have commented before, it is an image that opens my inner self..good work Simon
    Colin

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thanks Col, I lost the words to it when I added the framed picture to it but I am equally glad that it works without the words.

  • Sinéad Costello

    Sinéad Costello

    I love this effect. Looks like just what I need right now too. Fab

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Ha ha ha – thanks for that. I suppose the irony is that the more you drink the harder jigsaws are to do.

  • lennylennylenny

    lennylennylenny

    this is gorgeous

    love it

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thanks so much, happy New Year for ‘09 too.

  • Ken Mucke

    Ken Mucke

    A truly brilliant image..love how you constructed this shot….

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thanks Ken, much appreciated mate. Thanks for the favouriting too!

  • linda858100

    linda858100

    STUNNING

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thanks linda, I really appreciate it (and the favouriting too!)

  • kathy s gillentine

    kathy s gillen...

    great work

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thanks Kathy, I’m glad you like it.

  • Colleen Milburn

    Colleen Milburn

    Wow, this is brilliant – well done, indeed, Simon :-)

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thanks Colleen, I really appreciate your kind words.

  • eelsblueEllen

    eelsblueEllen

    Perfect transfer of the moment. It takes a real man to sit down and do a puzzle. :) However, a stiff drink makes anything all the more interesting. Lovely work here. Specs are a nice touch.

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thanks for the favouriting. I am going to have to disappoint you though – puzzles drive me mad, I rarely drink and the glasses belong to Mel !

  • PolarityPhoto

    PolarityPhoto

    Awesome work. Well executed. I’d also like to add, nice work with the lens baby those things drive me absolutely batty. Nice touch in post processing as well.

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thanks so much, I am so glad you like this. Does the lensbaby drive you batty in a good way not a bad way.

  • Stephen Rowsell

    Stephen Rowsell

    awesome, love the dof!

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thanks Steve, glad you like it. Bit of a personal fav. too.

  • mrscboretti

    mrscboretti

    Wow- I feel quiet and lonely just looking at this shot! So much of your work exudes a certain feeling! Amazing talent you have!

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thanks Christine, that is so nice of you to say so – I am really chuffed!

  • jwinman

    jwinman

    very nice and aptly titled still life.

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thanks for that – and thanks again for the favouriting too. I am glad the intended atmosphere came thru.

  • Peter Zentjens

    Peter Zentjens

    Such an emotive still life! Excellent work Simon.

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thanks so much Peter, I work with the elderly often and find that this type of scene is repeated in various configurations – I am glad there is an emotional feel to it.

  • Trenton Purdy

    Trenton Purdy

    WOW! This is fantastic.

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Thanks Trenton, I really appreciate that.

  • sigfusson

    sigfusson

    Love this perspective and the mood. Well done. Congrats on the feature. Cheers, S.

  • Simon Whittaker replied

    Woo hoo! Thanks for that!

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