Marlene Dietrich’s voice oozed seductively from the speakers. Gracie held the soft cloth of her dressing gown around her neck and closed her eyes. She hummed the words as she swayed gently to the music, letting Marlene’s songs take her away to a time long gone; a time of dreams and romance.
As the last song ran out of breath, Gracie let go too. She sighed and walked over to the window. Looking out at the street she noticed the drizzle had stopped. But with the air still frosty cold, the hurrying, scurrying people puffed trails of misty clouds from their lungs, and steam rose from the grates on the footpath.
Gracie’s apartment was furnished with grand old pieces from the 1940’s, all remnants from her parents. She had an obsession with that era, its films, its music, and its fashions. Gracie was a collector of anything to do with those times, and her walls were lined with framed film posters – “Killers”, “Whistle Stop”, “Show Boat”, “Mogambo”, featuring great actresses and actors like Grace Kelly, Ava Gardner, Clark Gable, and Gregory Peck. She modeled herself on the Grace Kellies and Ava Gardners of the world. She loved the raw sexiness of those women and the dignity with which they’d carried it off. Not that she didn’t appreciate the talents of current-day stars, she just didn’t see the same alluring qualities in them.
She sat at her dressing table and prepared for her date, carefully applying make-up in the style of Ava Gardner. Satisfied with the effect, she combed her hair similarly for the final touch. Gracie didn’t think herself old-fashioned. She was different, an individual, that’s all.
A little dab of Channel No 5 behind each ear, silk stockings, and she was ready for her tailored outfit hanging on the cupboard door. She strapped on her shoes, fetched the matching handbag and draped a silk scarf casually around her neck. Studying herself in the mirror she was pleased. She looked slender and elegant. One item was missing though – her little beret. This she arranged coquettishly on her head. It gave her a cheeky look that she liked. Everything else she needed was in her handbag. She picked up her keys and locked the apartment door behind her. This was her pattern every Thursday afternoon.
At the tram stop near the Grand Hyatt 18-year old Amanda sat and waited impatiently. She was half frozen in her little short skirt and bare midriff, but after 3 weeks she’d finally plucked up enough courage. Today she was going to ask. What was there to lose? She was shivering and nervous. She checked her watch again. 3:30 pm. She’ll be here soon, she thought. Oh my God, what if she gets angry? What if she’s offended? Doubt crept in. No, I must!
The tram came to a halt and Amanda’s heart beat faster as she watched the passengers disembark. Oh, how gorgeous! Such an eccentric old woman! I simply can’t miss this opportunity. She watched as the woman drew closer, all prim and proper and clad in her purple outfit. Amanda smiled as she studied the woman’s wrinkled old face with its dolly-red cheeks, heavy eye-make up, and ruby-red lipstick bleeding into the creases around the rim of her lips. That purple beret, askance on the silver hair, was more than any artist could resist! But the old woman walked with such great grace and dignity about her, that the whole image just became a delight to see. Amanda had watched Gracie for the last few weeks and was smitten by her. She felt compelled to capture this woman on canvas. She wanted to draw her, and to photograph her!
“Excuse me please?” Amanda said as Gracie passed by.
Gracie stopped. She wondered if this girl was going to ask her for money. A pretty girl, she thought as she looked at Amanda. “Yes Dear? Can I help you?”
Amanda stuttered a little, not quite knowing how to ask. Then she blurted, “I’m sorry……this is a little embarrassing, but my name is Amanda Jenkins and I’m a Fine Arts student. I’ve seen you a few times now and I would really love to draw you. We only ever get young models………….but I’d love to do something different and I think you’d make a wonderful study!”
“Oh my! I’m surprised. Dear me!” Gracie was taken aback, but flattered at the same time. “My name is Gracie. Amanda…….your name is Amanda, isn’t it?…….. Well, yes, I think that should be fine. But I need a little time to think about it too, you know. I have an important appointment with someone now though. I’ll be free to talk to you about it later if you like, or another day?”
Amanda was shaking inside from pure excitement. The old woman was not angry! “I understand…er…Gracie. Can I please talk to you again when you come back for your tram at 5:00 pm? I know you normally catch the tram then.”
“Of course Dear. That would be a pleasure. But I must be off now or I’ll be late.” With that Gracie continued on her way. She was smiling. She was thinking how much they had in common, how neither of them was shackled by convention. This young girl appreciated the Arts, and had the strength to pursue her passion. It would take a lot of guts to approach a total stranger like that, and ask to draw them! Gracie liked Amanda’s spirit. She felt a similarity to her own.
Amanda watched Gracie walk up the street to the corner. She felt so relieved, so elated, so free. She’d finally managed to caste aside her fear. And what a reward!
Gracie felt even more beautiful and elegant now as she made her way to the Grand Hyatt. She certainly didn’t feel 74. Blurry green lights told her it was safe to cross the road. She would, of course, never admit to failing eyesight. But she must hurry along or she’d be late.
As she entered the hotel lobby the hostess greeted her. “Hello Gracie! And how are you? Your usual table today?” She ushered Gracie to the table in the corner, already set with cup and saucer, ordered tea and walked away quietly. Gracie spent the next hour sipping at her tea, chatting softly and intimately to the empty chair opposite her, as she always did. The hostess smiled as she watched, but she would never understand or ever know that these were Gracie’s secret dates with Clark Gable, her long-time lover…….
Word Count: 1100
peter
That’s just a wonderful story … I have Gracie in my mind now – and she’s a heart warming person … and I could feel the nervous tension in Amanda as she approached the stranger … followed by the elation of success. Touching. Great work.
Michael Douglass
What a great story, such a sensitive style and approach, so clever to wrap me up in Gracies world then have the facade torn down by the reality. I think I had similar thoughts as you when you read mine, oh no some story about such and such, but no it was great. Thanks
kvanderjagt
thank you, that was very touching
pinkelephant
Yeah, this is great. I was a little taken aback at the change in perspective – before it became apparent that Gracie needed to be described by an objective party. Brought a smile to my face, very subtly and skillfully written.
dopey
Two lovely characters, but Amanda is a very nice person, I think. I really loved it !
Justin James
Just wow!....yep, just wow!
Andrea Mann
This was lovely, I could imagine my own Nan doing this.
Jienn Heibloem
your writing is magic
Elaine van Dyk
Thanks everyone, I’m very appreciative of your comments. It really spurs me on to try harder.
georgiegirl
That’s great!! and it was Clarke Gable, not a long lost hubby… Beautifully written!
Elaine van Dyk
Thanks for your comment georgiegirl. Of my stories, I like “Gracie” best, followed closely by “Whisperings”. So I’m really glad you liked “Gracie” too.
bellmusker
This story reeled me in immediately. The connection between the two women (or woman and girl, I should say) was beautifully enhanced by the gentle communication between them. I was really eager to hear what Amanda would say to Gracie. I only hope that one day I’m an eccentric old woman, able to captivate like Gracie…lovely writing!
Elaine van Dyk
Thank you bellmusker. I appreciate you lovely comments. Yes, I hope to be an eccentric old woman one day too…..it’s better than being boring, isn’t it!
Ian Temby
Great word pictures and sensitivity creating personalities. Great talent – please keep writing.
Elaine van Dyk
Thanks Ian.
kvanderjagt
hey… this is your best work no doubt about it. I loved it
Craig Shillington
Yeah Yeah YEAH!!! Shortlisted!!!! :D Wooohoooo :)
AnnieC
Again…yay yay yay yay!!! Hope it gets to final 15!! Luv Annie
shanghaiwu
wonderful story!
Michael Douglass
Good luck Whirli, have really appreciated your efforts in commenting on my stuff so I’m glad to see in it, especially with this story.
davecurtain
congratulations!
Shanina Conway
Whirli you minx, after all this time I never knew you were such a wonderful storyteller!
What a marvellous tale, such eloquence..I didn’t want it to end…wanted to learn more of Gracie, her youth, her adventures!
BTW if Gracie ever moves let me know if her apartment is for rent;)
Elaine van Dyk
Thanks Shanina – this story was written for the writers competition at the birth of RedBubble. I’ve just started a writing course this year, but have been somewhat distracted. I really need to get back and focus on it now. I’ll certainly let you know if Gracie vacates her apartment.
Elaine van Dyk
Thank you so much Phil! What a surprise…....I don’t ever expect comments on my stories.