Tiffany

“Tiffany?”

“Michael?”

We stare at one another, hardly knowing what to do besides breathe. I realize that the orange I had been judging has been squeezed into a pulp in my fist, the juices running down my fingers and dripping to the floor. Her knuckles, in turn, have turned white against the handlebars of the grocery cart she had been pushing.

“So.”

“So, how you’ve been.”

She looks like she’s going to be ill. I can’t blame her; my stomach is also beginning to twist, because I know what’s going to come next.

“Mommy, I don’t want apple juice, I want grape juice, so…”

He pauses, looking at his mother then at me. “Who’s this?”

“No one,” we say at the same time.


William H

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  • Natella2020
    Natella2020almost 4 years ago

    I can’t believe no one commented on this! Congratulations on the win!

  • Danny
    Dannyalmost 4 years ago

    ha
    so true
    well done

  • Alix Purcell
    Alix Purcellalmost 4 years ago

    Seriously! I agree with Natella, this is great :)

  • Karen01
    Karen01almost 4 years ago

    incredibly clever work.. a well deserved win!!

  • ladyb
    ladybalmost 4 years ago

    Love this.

  • PJ Ryan
    PJ Ryanalmost 4 years ago

    this is fabulous .. such a moment in time .. in many peoples lives.

  • WoodyWood
    WoodyWoodalmost 4 years ago

    I do like this. Funny, and touching.

  • bree787
    bree787almost 4 years ago

    this is an awesome piece of creativity!

  • joolie1
    joolie1almost 4 years ago

    It was too close to reality, perhaps, for some of us to know how to respond! Well done. :)

  • Katie Trzcinka
    Katie Trzcinkaalmost 4 years ago

    i love it! it lets you create a whole story for these people in your head!