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architectural shot for school, any constructive critisism welcomed

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  • Robert Dettman
    Robert Dettmanover 4 years ago

    Hi Wendy. You asked for comment so here goes. I like this as a study of colour, pattern and texture and can understand what attracted you to it.

    It looks like you have cropped from the bottom but I would like to see a version that cuts out about 1/2 of the sky. Also crop from the right to about half way to the curved wall. For me the “5” is a powerful visual attraction and being on the edge of the frame it draws the eye away from the main subject which for me is the intersection of planes in the middle. The centre part is what it is all about and the rest takes a secondary, supportive role. So then you are left with flat lighting that doesn’t help articulate the 3D forms and I think that is the main issue. It would be interesting to shoot again when there are soft shadows on the left facing surfaces if possible. (But the sun doesn’t always cooperate).

    You asked for comment so I assume that you have your own thoughts about it. I would like to hear what they are.

    Cheers! Robert

  • Manila
    Manilaover 4 years ago

    perfect composition. sparse and cold.

  • Lois Romer
    Lois Romerover 4 years ago

    I agree with robert, get rid of the five with a crop. rest is fine

  • Reynaldo
    Reynaldoover 4 years ago

    beauty… is in the eye of the beholder… beautiful shot…this would make a powerful abstract in paint….congrats on your work you are on the right track….
    cheers dear :) Rey

  • thanks so much Rey, your comment is much appreciated

    – wendys-designs

  • Solomon Walker
    Solomon Walkerover 4 years ago

    a great composition, a great photo capture!

  • thanks Solomon, appreciate the kind comment

    – wendys-designs

  • Philip Werner
    Philip Wernerover 4 years ago

    cool :)

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