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architectural shot for school, any constructive critisism welcomed
Hi Wendy. You asked for comment so here goes. I like this as a study of colour, pattern and texture and can understand what attracted you to it.
It looks like you have cropped from the bottom but I would like to see a version that cuts out about 1/2 of the sky. Also crop from the right to about half way to the curved wall. For me the “5” is a powerful visual attraction and being on the edge of the frame it draws the eye away from the main subject which for me is the intersection of planes in the middle. The centre part is what it is all about and the rest takes a secondary, supportive role. So then you are left with flat lighting that doesn’t help articulate the 3D forms and I think that is the main issue. It would be interesting to shoot again when there are soft shadows on the left facing surfaces if possible. (But the sun doesn’t always cooperate).
You asked for comment so I assume that you have your own thoughts about it. I would like to hear what they are.
perfect composition. sparse and cold.
I agree with robert, get rid of the five with a crop. rest is fine
beauty… is in the eye of the beholder… beautiful shot…this would make a powerful abstract in paint….congrats on your work you are on the right track….cheers dear :) Rey
thanks so much Rey, your comment is much appreciated
a great composition, a great photo capture!
thanks Solomon, appreciate the kind comment
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