Look into my eyes,
Dark pools of sultry night.
Look at my sweet thighs,
Smoother than any silk.
Look at my soft hair,
Don’t you want to touch it.
Look at my breasts bared.
Ah, your eyes are there.
Look at my luscious lips.
A pout intoxicating.
Look at my finger tips.
Imagine the nails upon you.
I am such a naughty sinner,
But God I love this mirror.
Anni Morris
This certainly draws the reader in. Nice one!
Paul Rees-Jones replied
Thanks Anni
Allison Lane
Awesome, a very cool piece. Congrats!
Paul Rees-Jones replied
Thank you, my fellow Canadian…LOL
Lehane
Well done and congrats on the win Paul! Richly deserved!
Paul Rees-Jones replied
DBA, always apreciate your comments on poetry…I know how hard it can be to read. I applied the twisted rule to the end though…LOL
Pagly2
A Beautiful piece…well written….thank you…
reflector
Well written and it makes you laugh at the end. Congratulations.
Karirose
Lovely twist at the end! Congratulations!
SachaSatori
Creative and clever…
Roslyn Slater 22 days ago
Very funny!