Face in the Smoke.
Inspired by Rob Toombs Blue Scent
Do you see the face?
Face in the Smoke. belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry !, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Bits and Pieces , Core [C.O.R.E], Freedom to Shine, Shameless Self-Promotion, The beauty of poetry, The Patchwork , The Word Tree, Vibration in Art and Verse - VAVoom!, Who are YOU to Judge?, Writing: Persuing Happiness and You're AcceptedThere are creatures,
Just behind,
Slightly living,
Slightly blind.
Weaving circles,
Of lost delights,
In evening shades,
Lost at night.
You feel their whispers,
On goose bumped arms,
You hear their voices,
Subconscious alarms.
Perhaps you are dreaming,
Perhaps they aren’t real,
Perhaps it is nothing,
The chill that you feel.
Live in your ignorance,
Live in blind hope,
Until you see,
The face in the smoke.
wigs
Great write Paul so fitting with the image…and yes I see the face, actually I see two
Paul Rees-Jones replied
Thanks so much…couldn’t get it out of my head when i saw this amazing shot.
Glad you like.
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GodsDemon
Great piece, a whisper of the lost and blissful ignorance that has a price. Nice piece!
Paul Rees-Jones replied
Thanks for the wondeful comment!
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Matt Roberts
Great write, but what is it?
Paul Rees-Jones replied
Thanks Matt..um..what is what?
Roger Sampson
Paul Rees-Jones replied
Thanks sooo Much Roger! I am humbled.
Always appreciated!
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PapasGirl
you are so articulate…I love your writing
Paul Rees-Jones replied
Thakns you…what a lovely compliment.
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Matt Roberts
The creatures.
Paul Rees-Jones replied
Ah…you have just become one of my favorite people…no one has ever asked a question like that…lol. I have an active imagination…perhaps these creatures are ghosts…perhaps they are created by our own imagination…perhaps as in the picture created by Rob, they are illusions. There are things that go bunp in the night, shadows in the corner of your eye, creatures that lurk under the bed, all of these things are non existant, made real by our own fears…interpretation is open..what are they to you? Me thinks i have to write a story now…yes you are a favourite person indeed….Thanks for making me think a bit on this one.
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Matt Roberts
Lol. Cool. Glad to be one of your faves :p To me? Well, they remind me of the fairies in James Herbert’s Once.
Nancy Chambers
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Nancy Chambers
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wigs
Congratulations….......
You have been featured in Writing: Persuing Happiness
Paul Rees-Jones replied
How awesome!
How are you Wigs? Loved the glass shot! I was about to go fav it.
LOL
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Cheryl Fugate
Great write … congrats on your feature :) :)
Paul Rees-Jones replied
Thanks Cheryl!
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