She is Woman (Warning...Graphic and suggestive.)

Paul Rees-Jones
Author: Paul Rees-Jones
Word Count: 926
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She is Woman (Warning...Graphic and suggestive.)

Warning slightly graphic and suggestive….

For the all things Vampiric The Seduction Challenge.

She is Woman (Warning...Graphic and suggestive.) belongs to the following groups:

Blood Red - All things vampiric, Blue Room and Pulp Noir

She wasn’t sure how she got to his room. One moment she was sipping on her Caesar, the next she was standing in his room at the hotel. He sat on the bed. She stood, afraid to approach him. She was afraid of the tingles running up and down her spine, a quiver of memory of love so sweet it could last all night if meant to.

She was unaccustomed to attention. Her mind raced to the man that was her husband, even now probably searching for her. His anger would be a painful display when she returned. The man on the bed was moving. She watched him as he stood. He was a strong looking man, dark shoulder length hair that looked silky to the touch. She wanted to touch it. He stood just shy of six feet, the perfect height for her. His shoulders were broad and tapered down to his waist. God she wanted him to take her.

Almost as if reading her mind, he moved without making noise, no shuffling or soft scuffing on the carpet. It was like he danced to her in some unknown tango of seduction. Before she could sigh, he was behind her, so close she could feel his breath on her bare shoulder. He placed his hands on her. The heat burst through her body, being caused by nothing other than the fact he finally touched her. She felt a slight murmur release from her lips, a pitched sigh giving permission to his advances.

His hands swam around her ocean blue dress. Exploring the surface and diving below when necessary. She felt her world swim too, feeling alive and wanted. He finally slipped her out of her dress and it fell to the floor exposing her to him. She wore only a lacey thong under the dress. In truth she was hoping to find something this night to take her away from the life she had. His hands swam, her body shook.

She turned to face him, looking into his dark eyes. His smile was genuine, as was his excitement. She fumbled with the few buttons of his shirt, giggling to herself as his hands caress her backside. As she undid the last and peeled the shirt off, she was greeted by a strong chest. She kissed it, thanking whatever god had forged this man.

She kept her attention on his chest as her hands fell to his waist. Her hands knowing what they wanted to have, to feel, throbbing and warm. She needed to feel like a woman, like a woman who could please and entice. As she found what she was looking for, pressing against the front of his slacks desperately trying to escape, she felt his finger find her. She shook as the first spasm of pleasure shot through her body. My god had it been that long, she thought as she fought through the pleasure to release what she wanted.

They stood there in front of each other naked and wet. For a second she found his eyes again, such loving eyes for a man skilled in love making. Her gaze slipped from his and down to the tool that she wanted to control. She needed to show this man that she was skilled too. She dropped slowly down to her knees, allowing her nails to drag down his chest. It was his turn to moan and she heard it…like a beautiful piece of music playing in her mind.

She used her tongue, gently tickling him. She continued until she could feel him try to push himself toward her. This was the time; this was the moment when she would make him know she was a lover. She opened her mouth and allowed him to slide into her. She could feel him spasm in response to the pressure she applied. She took all of him deep into her throat. She was alive, in control. She was not just a bride, taken for granted by the man who said he loved her so long ago. Her lover was loud now. His grunts and moans making her go faster. She wanted him to know, she needed him to know. She was more than a wife, more than a plaything, she was…independent.

She bit down hard, her fangs piercing him allowing his blood to flow. He screamed in agony at first, but slowly it subsided. He dropped to the floor, but she held on, sucking on him with a wild fervor she had not felt in years. She felt him spasm and go rigid and then limp. She released him and stood wiping the warm liquid from her mouth. He wasn’t moving, he was too weak from her skills.

She moved without making noise on the carpet. Her dress was back on in moments, she glanced back to the still man covered in his own blood.

“I’ll be downstairs, lover,” she laughed as she left the room. She felt powerful again, whole again.

At the bar he saw her, she was radiant. His eyes followed her shape as she moved towards him. This was the woman he remembered; this was the Sasha of their youth. He felt the lost feelings return to his dead hands.

“I’m leaving you Vlad,” she said quickly, not stopping to take his hand or sit at the table.

Sasha walked with her head held high. She left the hotel bar. She smiled as she noticed the eyes of men follow her. She knew, she finally knew, she was woman.

  • veronicapurcell

    veronicapurcell

    ooh. okay now for a cold shower… :0)

  • Dalton Sayre

    Dalton Sayre

    H O T!!!!

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    Thanks!!!!

  • Shannon Rene' Justice

    Shannon Rene' ...

    wow….breathless

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    Thanks Shannon.

  • Zolton

    Zolton

    Yup… nothing like a good divorce to get those juices flowing. Did I just say that? Oh, guess not… I wrote it. Ha ha. Wicked tail.

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    LOL…but true…

  • * RoyAllenHunt *

    * RoyAllenHunt *

    Wow!!! Way to paint a picture. Wow!!!

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    Thanks Roy.

  • Angel0418

    Angel0418

    Wow…ya wow

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    Thanks Angel…glad you liked it.

  • Medusa

    Medusa

    MMM… Now that would be a perfect au revoir mon amour… ;-)

    Mx

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    MMmm…I agree.

    : { )}

  • LivMiller

    LivMiller

    How did you climb into my mind and recreate that moment?
    Thank-you.

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    Wow…just lucky guess….

  • lightsmith

    lightsmith

    Gulp. Literally…..

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    lol.

  • artisticphoto

    artisticphoto

    Wow! You really made this come alive…....excellent work!!

  • Damian

    Damian

    Haha, great work Paul, very enjoyable.

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    Thanks Damian.

  • lightsmith

    lightsmith

    Congratulations – Winner!

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    Thanks!

  • * RoyAllenHunt *

    * RoyAllenHunt *

    Congratulations on the win. This is superb writing.

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    Thanks Roy

  • MissCherie

    MissCherie

    no wonder you won….. mine would be too porn if i wrote a story as such :P good work though

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    Thanks MissCherie

  • visualmetaphor

    visualmetaphor

    Thats awesome =)

  • kimangeline

    kimangeline

    you always hit me with unexpected endings!! i love it…and heading for the cold shower now too…wow

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    Thanks Kim…lol

  • Astoreth

    Astoreth

    i like women who leave with a ‘bang’....lol.

  • XavierMordant

    XavierMordant

    Seriously sexy

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    Thanks you sir…

  • KrysPyramid

    KrysPyramid

    wow i read this and i instantly fell in love.
    i love writings that i can picture every scene in my head and thats exactly what i did when i read this piece of writing.
    thank you so much for this :)

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    Thanks you…that is an amazingly great compliment!

    Thanks for reading.
    : { )}

  • kossimarsalsa

    kossimarsalsa

    Beautiful writing, something about love sex and vampires goes so damn well together. It is very powerfully written.

    xx
    s-a

  • Shelly Hiebert

    Shelly Hiebert

    I agree with Krys above…..I could totally picture and feel everything…...amazing, lovely, hot!

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    Why thank you very much shelly.
    : { )}

  • msdebbie

    msdebbie

    I really liked this one Paul – sublimely sensual. Especially the description of his moan like a beautiful piece of music playing in her mind. Gorgeous xoxo

  • Quinn Blackburn

    Quinn Blackburn

    Brilliant! Sensual, visceral, evocative… alluring with a lethal grin, love it!

    :) wishing you laughter

  • Laurie Search

    Laurie Search

    Oh my…..Very, very sexy! :)

  • blueravenice

    blueravenice

    Wicked love it!

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