Please don’t hate me
Don’t fret or scold me
I am what I was
And more
Please don’t lecture me
Don’t stare and ridicule me
I didn’t want to hurt
Or more
Please just look at me
just finally see me
I’m tired of invisibility
And more
Please just want me
Just hold and love me
I am so alone
and more.
hilarydougill, 2 months ago
Heartfelt!! Beautifully written, lovely sentiment. Someone in need of love, not wanting it, needing it!!! well done
Alan Findlater, 2 months ago
great sentiments well written
Naylor, 2 months ago
Never alone my friend ((((((((((((((((((((((((((((((HUG)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
I hear your words always and I really can relate to the emotion you express …. more than you know I understand :)
I really like the way you have written this too Paul… the repetativeness of the and mores really help to make the impact !!!
girlinthestars, 2 months ago
wonderfully bittersweet~*
Miri, 2 months ago
simply beautiful – the last verse is heart wrenching
Paul Rees-Jones in reply to hilarydougill’s comment, about 1 month ago
Thank you…you put it quite well.
Paul Rees-Jones in reply to Alan Findlater’s comment, about 1 month ago
Thanks
Paul Rees-Jones in reply to Naylor’s comment, about 1 month ago
Danka mein Highness…
Paul Rees-Jones in reply to girlinthestars’s comment, about 1 month ago
Exactly…thanks for reading.
Paul Rees-Jones in reply to Miri’s comment, about 1 month ago
Thanks.