Lovers.

Paul Rees-Jones
Author: Paul Rees-Jones
Word Count: 438
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Lovers.

For the Twisted Tales Comp. “like we did last summer.”

For another tale of the Lovers click here

Lovers. belongs to the following groups:

Twisted Tales

They stood on the roof of the high rise. Holding hands and staring into each other’s eyes with such love. They hummed to each other, their favorite song and turned to the edge of the rooftop. Before them was a brightly-lit cityscape. 30 floors gave them a lovely view of the river and tonight the barges blew their horns in remembrance of the lovers.

“It is so nice up here,” the man said.

“Yes, the breeze is nice. It was so hot downstairs,’ The woman replied.

“Remember when we first met Marni?”

“Who could forget?” She smiled at him with a raised brow.

“I wasn’t talking about that, but come to think of it.” he let his voice trail off.

“My, my, Sam. Are we getting nostalgic?”

“Well, now that you mention it. Remember last year. The stars were out, the boats were singing to us like tonight and we…well we enjoyed our time together.”

“Yes darling I remember it well, but we have no blankets, no wine…”

“But we have each other, we could still relive parts of it.”

“Like we did last summer? Oh that would be lovely.”

They held hands looking out at the stars and being with each other completely. Sam wrapped his arm around Marni and she wrapped her arm around Sam. They looked at each other and felt the feelings they always felt for each other. A need to carry on to love to be in this moment.

Sam pressed his lips to hers and she willingly returned the kiss. It was as sweet as the first time and lasted just as long. Before it ended they allowed themselves to fall off the edge of the roof. Still in the embrace of lovers they fell to the pavement below. The sound of their bodies hitting the pavement was not enough to stop the song in their hearts. And the impact was not enough to break their embrace.

They lay there locked in love that went on forever. Sam’s eyes opened then Marni’s. They stood up finally releasing their hold on each other. Both wiping the dust and concrete from their clothing and hair. Marni looked at Sam with a look of slight pain.

“Just like last summer.”

Sam smiled, “and the summer before.”

“Well there will always be next year,” Marni whispered.

“Yes, maybe next year.” Sam whispered back.

They walked away from the large break in the sidewalk, lovers cursed, each unable to leave the other. Yet deep inside they needed the endlessness of days to end.

  • Lehane

    Lehane

    Thanks for taking the time and effort to enter Paul! And best of luck!

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    Thank you sir…

  • jcmontgomery

    jcmontgomery

    Whoa!! Holy Effin…uh…oh, sorry….gut reaction – but a good one I assure you. Excuse me now while I go scrape my jaw off the floor where it dropped.

    Stunning Paul. Just stunning!!

  • ChainmailChick

    ChainmailChick

    I’m giggling at JC’s reaction! I had the same…excellent bit of work, Paul!

  • Alison Pearce

    Alison Pearce

    Great!

  • Micky McGuinness

    Micky McGuinness

    I never guessed that twist!
    I was thinking yes nice written love story Paul, but not my cup of tea, and then all of a sudden it hit like the pavement from 30 floors up! Great story : )

  • DBALehane

    DBALehane

    Congratulations Paul on winning the Twisted Tales story competition Like We Did Last Summer with this fantastic tale. Very well deserved!

  • Natella2020

    Natella2020

    Congrats Paul!

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    Thanks

  • rrohn

    rrohn

    Congrats! Nice work.

  • Faith Puleston

    Faith Puleston

    OOOH this one had my reptile brain alert! (Goose bumps or goose pimples!) A cracking good story with a nice twist!

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    Thank you for reading and enjoying!

  • ladyb

    ladyb

    Oh this is just brilliant.

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    Thanks sooo much : { )}

  • bonbon3272

    bonbon3272

    Oh wow! Beautfil yet sad. I felt for them at the end.

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    And they just keep going…Thanks for reading!

  • frozenfa

    frozenfa

    WHOAH!! love this!! =D

  • Kelsey Williams

    Kelsey Williams

    WOOOOOOOOOOOW! gingerly super glues jaw back on Magnificent!

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    LOL thanks!!

  • MaKayla Songer

    MaKayla Songer

    Wow. This was simply amazing. I figured that they would jump but… I never saw that last bit coming. Very, very nice. :D

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    Thank you so much

    : { )}

  • scarletmoon

    scarletmoon

    Fantastic!

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    Thanks!

  • espanolvive

    espanolvive

    well done mate,
    like ur style.

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    Cheers!

  • libra88

    libra88

    I like this!!!! Keep up the good work! I really felt how everything was playing out! Good expressions!

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    Thank You

    : { )}

  • rojaburbuja

    rojaburbuja

    oh…what a tragic piece of writing….it leaves a mark on your heart ;-)

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    LOL…Thanks

  • Aeona Bliss

    Aeona Bliss

    Wow, now THAT was a surprise. Very good twist. Thanks!

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    Thank you for reading and enjoying..

    : { )}

  • Shannon Rene' Justice

    Shannon Rene' ...

    check you out mr featured! :)

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    lol…I know…first time…lol

  • Shannon Rene' Justice

    Shannon Rene' ...

    :) im ready for the next installment whenever you are dear :D

  • Flic Manning

    Flic Manning

    Amazing, blew me away

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    Thanks soo much!
    : { )}

  • JoHadley

    JoHadley

    Ok. That was not the ending I expected! Wow, that was fantastic. You are a very good writer Paul. I look forward to reading more of your work.

  • Paul Rees-Jones

    Paul Rees-Jones

    Aw Thanks Jo… I have a lot of work on here…lol

  • Erika .

    Erika .

    oh wow, this is unlike anything I’ve ever read before! Amazing!

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    I love it when people read this story and enjoy it. Thanks erika!
    : { )}

  • Shelly Hiebert

    Shelly Hiebert

    This is wonderfully written and really moved me Paul. I love a story with a good twist at the end :)

  • Paul Rees-Jones replied

    Thanks again Shelly.

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