Take Me Away

Gayle Shaw
Author: Gayle Shaw
Word Count: 160
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Take Me Away

A poem of love which I penned in 2001.

You take me away to another place

Where all I can see is the smile on your face

Where all I can feel is the touch of your hand

Where we have not a care, where negativity is banned

Where all I can sense is your soft, sweet gaze

Where I stare into your eyes in a loving daze

Where my emotions for you can be shown with a touch

Where we can feel that our love means so much

Where you tenderly kiss me and take my breath away

Where we wish we may never see the end of the day

Where my love and your love intertwine

Where I can tell you that you truly are mine

Where you can tell I love you with all of my heart

With my mind, my body, my spirit, my art

Where I love you so much it brings me to tears

Where our love will last all through the years.

  • Noelene Davies

    Noelene Davies

    Very touching and very well written Gayle.

  • Gilberte

    Gilberte

    Very well written and hope for you the love will last

  • Gayle Shaw

    Gayle Shaw

    Thank you for your comments, they are much appreciated : )

  • coffeebean

    coffeebean

    Such a beautiful work, so well written, truly beautiful Gayle :)

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