Captured in 2009 this image is one of a few of my favorites from an Autumn trip away. The stunning mist early in the morning was a sight to be seen and one I wish to repeat again this year.

I would love your feedback about this image and it’s balance.
The central jetty is against the rules and the incomplete boat to the left is not ideal, The reflection is not straight either.

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Comments

  • canonman99
    canonman99about 5 years ago

    with all that wrong how come it’s an excellent image……..:))SS

  • Thanks for that. I am struggling finding balance when and image is not in thirds and parts cut out but I think they can work.

    – Margaret Metcalfe

  • rasnidreamer
    rasnidreamerabout 5 years ago

    You are too critical of this shot! Even with the small infractions it is beautiful! The composition as a whole is wonderful. XXSUEXX

  • Thanks Sue I am loving taking images and trying to develop composition in my head.

    – Margaret Metcalfe

  • canonman99
    canonman99about 5 years ago

    Some of the geatest and remembered images don’t follow the rules……in photography the only rule to follow is " immotalize the moment "

  • John Conway
    John Conwayabout 5 years ago

    If you are talking about “Camera Club Rules” there will always be something to point out as “incorrect”

    If you look at it and break it down, there’s nothing wrong with it.

    Of course the reflection isn’t straight, but the fact that the pier is, let’s us believe that it is the water that is causing this aberration so we accept it.

    The boat is incomplete, yes, but what is it about the boat that attracts us to it? The colour. It doesn’t have to be complete to make the red jump out.

    Atmosphere, the low lying mist is probably the main aspect of what you were trying to capture and you have done that well, so you have succeeded.

    You could “increase the colour” on the foliage (top right) to add a diagonal balance to the red boat, just a thought..

    All in all I think it’s a wonderful shot, looks a good location to shoot early on.

  • anisja
    anisjaabout 5 years ago

    For me everything is just fine and maybe if all was " perfect " your photo would lost a whole life that is in it .

  • Thankyou I am have such nice memories of this place and I was afraid the beauty was in my eyes only.

    – Margaret Metcalfe

  • Margaret Metcalfe
    Margaret Metcalfeabout 5 years ago

    Thanks John your advice is always appreciated, Your comments help me see!
    I will have a go at what you have suggested. I would love to head back there late Autumn! maybe a GT weekend?

  • BCImages
    BCImagesabout 5 years ago

    the best I have seen today

  • Larry Lingard-Davis
    Larry Lingard-...about 5 years ago

    Well, after seeing this and the photographic possibilities, it looks like I might be going to Daylesford in the next couple of weeks.
    I also want to do the Nunnery…..
    Thanks mate.

  • kukawa
    kukawaabout 5 years ago

    So Much to View in this Amazing Capture!!! This is what all of us Photographers work towards. To be able to pull the viewer right in,and view it longer than a couple of seconds ,"~)This is Truly a story without Words……………..Lovin This Bunches!!! peace, syl

  • Irene  Burdell
    Irene Burdellabout 5 years ago

    A beautiful capture and I love the mist , it adds a bit of mystery x

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