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Upon the bark

As though
stripping bark from a fallen log
tearing off piece by piece
contemplating his ancient craft
forming words within his mind
flowing from his steel pen
seizing the very essence of the word
inviting me in gentle praise,
into a manly adult freshness
spreading fungus upon the bark
reflecting his true colours
moving into my heart’s air
arousing through its essence
like a pine forest at Christmas -
yet with his
shiny tinsel fluttering in the wind -
Enticing my slumbering life
my sick mind barely all there
into the realms of playing dare
becoming a poets spice
in cautious awakening
my heart beats
blinded by the smell of man
yet unsuspecting and word drunk
his true scent
is already sticking to my hair
new words trip me
screaming whilst cutting
flattery fell me
halfway through the fall
straight into the
stinging nettle’s nest
awakening from a nightmare
I am burnt
yet grateful to escape
a poet’s real roughness
written words upon
the very rough bark
instead of beneath
the smooth gentleness
sought by the my sacred papyrus scroll
formed from within the very core.

© 2011/01/02 EJA Smith
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Comments

  • Gail Bridger
    Gail Bridgerover 3 years ago

    WOW
    Beautiful writing, the situation sounds so grand. But, so happy you awoke from the nightmare. Smiles…
    You are such a terrific lady…the soul mate is still awaiting the meeting!!

  • Darling Gail, my first poem for the year! Last year this time I was still in the darkness of my mind! Oh it is beautiful to fly free! Thanks my dearest for the Fav and wonderful words! Luv you!

    – Betty Smith_Voce

  • linaji
    linajiover 3 years ago

    My God Betty you are one hella poet!

  • Linaji, thank you for that magnificent compliment! I am most grateful and hug for the favourite! Much love to you!

    – Betty Smith_Voce

  • lisameryl
    lisamerylover 3 years ago

    Betty, Bravo my dear!! If this is your first poem for the year what will you do for an encore!!? You have the heart, soul, spirit and love of a poet! For you are one with the pen!! Such a BEAUTIFUL write with profound imagery from your words alone! I could feel, touch and see the elements within your poem! I do love the accompanied image! Much love and peace be with you always, Lisa XO

  • Dear Lisa, Thanks for that! Yes, its the 1st of the year and hopefully they will improve! I am learning my darling… school fees in mny ways… Thanks the photo is mine from my garden. I wrote a poem about the garden and I desribed the ‘Afrikaner-bean coffee tree’ which this is at a huge rock where I used to sit and contemplate the garden layout (20 years ago). I am glad you liked the poem, as I thought of the smell of the wood when the bark is pulled off – its essence filling… hope I conveyed that clearly… Much love and hug for the fav!

    – Betty Smith_Voce

  • Rocky Loder
    Rocky Loderover 3 years ago

    I have always said you are a true poet my friend…awesome

  • I am laughing… lol! Did I get it right for a change? Love you my dearest Rocky… I decided to roll out the verbs – make them work! Much love to you my dearest friend and here is to wishing you a wonderful 2011! Thanks for the favoruite!

    – Betty Smith_Voce

  • Rhenastarr
    Rhenastarrover 3 years ago

    A poet is a poet, is a poet and my dear you are a poet. What a wonderful start for the New Year, I look forward to more of your beautiful word play. A favorite definitely!

  • Rhenastarr you will make me write more often! What a wonderful compliment my dearest! Thank you for the favourite and above all, thanks for your magnificent appraisal. Much love to you!

    – Betty Smith_Voce

  • ian osborne
    ian osborneover 3 years ago

    From the very core indeed Betty! Wonderfully strong and confidently written. 2011 watch out…here she comes! Happy, healthy, creative and inspirational new year to you Betty.

  • Yes my dearest Ian, Happy, healthy and hopefully the rest will indeed follow! What an appraisal from the Champion of writers himself! Thank you dearest Ian for those lovely words. Here is to wishing you a wonderful 2011! Much love.

    – Betty Smith_Voce

  • SimplyRed
    SimplyRedover 3 years ago

    WOW…Loved, loved love, the journey I was taken on through this work….a great start for the New Year…and I cannot leave without also saying you truly are a poet xxxxx

  • My goodness Red, I am surpirsed by the reader’s comments that I am a poet! Thanks for that wonderful compliment! Hugs for the favourite! Much love and thanks for your appraisal.

    – Betty Smith_Voce

  • Drew Trotter
    Drew Trotterover 3 years ago

    Phenomenal, what grasping and heartfelt communion. You have truly culled from the rich dark dirt here. So inspiring.

  • Thanks Drew for the visit and wonderful words! Thanks for the favourite! Much love and belessings.

    – Betty Smith_Voce

  • highbeam
    highbeamover 3 years ago

    A gripping read and a delight to the thoughts of a poetess within, though lingering subtle questions come as well from the roughness spoken of… from the passing of time or fresh as a recalled memory to present. A great write Betty… with love. VVV

  • Dearest Russ thanks for your ever insightful appraisal. I am so glad you like this one, again branching out so to speak into yet another way of poetry for me… I am glad it worked! Hugs to you for the favourite! VVV

    – Betty Smith_Voce

  • ynnel10
    ynnel10over 3 years ago

    beautiful write…….

  • Ynnel thank you indeed for the visit and read… and your appraisal.

    – Betty Smith_Voce

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