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My Tight Cocoon

The insignificance I feel
can be altered, yet
somehow, I still hold onto it.
The fear of drowning in my
overwhelming thoughts
makes me feel uneasy.
I have gotten too
comfortable in the idea
of me, as a failure.
So, I do not change
but evermore, I stay
exactly the same.
Wrapped in my tight
cocoon and my
wings cannot show.
I died a long time ago.
I am just a shell.

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Sometimes the darkness can really get to me. I don’t feel like this all the time. I am actually a very happy person. But there are those days when I just feel horrible.

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cocoon, failure, loathing

I think that life is beautiful in all its grandeur. I am constantly inspired by nature, kindness, family, friends and most of all, love. Not only romantic love,but all kinds of love, in all its different and unique forms. I always feel blessed and loved. I always strive to become a better person with everything I do. Blessed is the world that keeps me smiling♥

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  • AmberLily
    AmberLilyalmost 4 years ago

    Perhaps for now….nobody can be a self-loathing failure forever….when we are so tired that we cannot seem to spark ourselves back to life….then something, someone helps us to get there. x

  • Yes, I completely agree with you. I was just feeling dark the day I wrote this. But thank you for taking the time to read this. It is much appreciated =)

    – vkatt0304

  • HamperRefuser
    HamperRefuseralmost 4 years ago

    I enjoyed the read… thanks.

  • Thanks so much for reading this =)

    – vkatt0304

  • lilynoelle
    lilynoellealmost 4 years ago

    Beautiful sadness – I know the feeling. But, without sadness (at times, of course, not always) we wouldn’t have a fourth of the art and literature this world offers. I do think that sorrow is the force that inspires a great deal of art. When Tom died, a part of me died, but my Muse came out in full force. I would rather have Tom than my poems, but it’s still interesting how these things work.

    Anyway, this is a delicate expression of sadness, and a beautiful call for hope.

  • awww you are too kind. Thanks so much for reading it. I think sadness is a great inspiration for beautiful poetry/art/writing. I just think that without sadness we wouldn’t really know what happiness is!

    – vkatt0304

  • Klaus Bohn
    Klaus Bohnalmost 4 years ago

    hummm i can’t realty respond but with my feelings…

  • tjs1010
    tjs1010almost 4 years ago

    it’s ok we all have moments of uneasiness in life. What we all need is self belief.
    By sharing your work with the world here you already have taken that step.
    I believe you are a wonderful poet, writer and person.
    stay positive.

  • Thank you a million times. I really appreciate it. Thanks sooo much for reading my poetry and giving me such wonderful and helpful feedback :)

    – vkatt0304

  • George Coombs
    George Coombsover 3 years ago

    Excellent well structured piece that says so much with so few words. I feel from having seen a good deal of your work now Veronica that, your are a great writer and indeed a great person,do try and keep going and look to the future with positive hope-take care

  • bluevelvetrose1
    bluevelvetrose1almost 3 years ago

    We have all experience this in our own way, but it’s the moving forward part that is the hardest.

  • Yes, moving forward can always be difficult.

    – vkatt0304

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