Messenger

vinee
Author: vinee
Word Count: 78
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Messenger

Her comes the moon knocking on my door
Has he got some message from my love or
he gonna pretend to be nice
I know i have no choice
but i will wait for you patiently
I will sing a song
I will think of the things you might have told him
I know you love me
You want me
Say something my dear
Say something
Sweet,bitter or a lie would even do
But please say something

  • Roscoe Davis III

    Roscoe Davis III

    I really like this poem.

  • vinee

    vinee

    Thank you Roscoe!

  • PhotogeniquE IPA

    PhotogeniquE IPA

    lovely flow of words. You can feel the anticipation of the waiting for the message.

    BTW – should the first word be ‘here’?

  • vinee

    vinee

    Oh yes that’s a mistake.Thank you for appreciating.

  • demon

    demon

    Love this vinee…very well done…xox

  • girlinthestars

    girlinthestars

    wow. just the aching need to hear his voice. perfect.

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