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A kiss

her lips unsmiling
impervious to his lightness
a kiss changed all



senryu

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Born in spring, my name means Spring. I love poetry in all its forms

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  • kenroome
    kenroome5 months ago

    Reading, you feel the movement.

  • Richard G Witham
    Richard G Witham5 months ago
    Lovely words Vesna. I see a wonderful image of two melting together
  • solarbear
    solarbear5 months ago

    Unsmiling lips, is a very seductive thing, and the lightness of his lips is also the lightness of her voice here.. Very nice :))

  • JaneRoberts
    JaneRoberts5 months ago

    Mmmmm. Sweet! x

  • Rocky Loder
    Rocky Loder5 months ago

    beautiful words Vesna….

  • Donna19
    Donna195 months ago

    Thinking they can be confusing and lovely Vesna:)

  • Mui-Ling Teh
    Mui-Ling Teh5 months ago

    With nothing said. Very lovely Vesna.

  • TheWanderingBoo
    TheWanderingBoo5 months ago

    beautiful

  • LisaMM
    LisaMM5 months ago

    perfect