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ode to joy

thousand little explosions in the mind
exclamation marks, screams of joy,
gone
like big purple balloons with dancing strings
free

divine
beauty
it almost hurts
to see it and feel it and can’t experience it
completely
because we blink
we lose a little something
when
we think

oh beauty
ode to joy
come in please
I can endure
you’re the most beautiful
so pure

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beauty, music, joy, humanity

Born in spring, my name means Spring. I love poetry in all its forms.

The word “poetry” derives from the Latin feminine noun poetria, meaning not “poetry” but “poetess”.

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  • dedmanshootn
    dedmanshootnalmost 2 years ago

    very interesting write. i read it again and yet again and could another, and probably will

  • please read some more, it is such a wonderful compliment Dave
    thank you

    – Vesna *

  • Donna19
    Donna19almost 2 years ago

    Really lovely Vesna

  • so glad you liked it Donna
    Thank you

    – Vesna *

  • sandra .
    sandra .almost 2 years ago

    You are a wabi sabi ‘flash mob’…wonderful pairing
    Sandra :)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) x

  • sandra .
    sandra .almost 2 years ago

    Dear Vesna x

  • erichbiemer
    erichbiemeralmost 2 years ago

    more invocation than invitation this feels….lovely…

  • LisaMM
    LisaMMalmost 2 years ago

    WOW…….Dear Vesna, your words are just beautiful, capturing the fleeting nature of pure joy, the yearning to feel it……and the video is just (insert expletive here) brilliant!!! Now, that is my kind of flash mob……what a gorgeous moment captured, i wish i’d been there…..it made me cry, the music is so JOYous and one can’t help but be moved. Thank you for sharing both your beautiful words, and the video. xxxxx

  • solarbear
    solarbearalmost 2 years ago

    Vesn*a*
    Vesn*u*
    Venu*s*

    You in aus..? One day?

  • yes, I really wish
    :)

    – Vesna *

  • Mui-Ling Teh
    Mui-Ling Tehalmost 2 years ago

    When I watch a video I sometimes have the tendency to pause many times throughout it. Indeed when we blink we loose a little something. And so you fragment a relatively short piece of writing into lines so we can enjoy each moment of it. So lovely Vesna.

  • linaji
    linajialmost 2 years ago

    this is for me completely brilliant work dearest.. a big wow!

  • Richard G Witham
    Richard G Withamalmost 2 years ago

    Fantastic poem Vesna. I read and shake my head in acknowledgement. You must have been in this head of mine. I also love the line, “We lose a little something when we think”. So true.

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