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Big Blue Line

What can we give to the world
and paint it blue?
A shirt from our back?
A pair of shoes?
An old book?
A ball?
A toy?
A picture of the Moon?

The things are shuffled and made
The words are spoken and sometimes well said
We walk the Milky Way
We drink from the wisdom well
What are we giving to the world?
Is it our Intelligence
or Creativity
or thirst for Beauty
or something we can’t still define
that looks like a Big Blue Line?

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Born in spring, my name means Spring. I love poetry in all its forms.

The word “poetry” derives from the Latin feminine noun poetria, meaning not “poetry” but “poetess”.

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  • Rocky Loder
    Rocky Loderalmost 2 years ago

    really good poetry…really like it….awesome

  • thanks Rocky, so glad you liked this one

    – Vesna *

  • Mui-Ling Teh
    Mui-Ling Tehalmost 2 years ago

    Very compelling and philosophical piece. I did actually take a philosophy course once, and the prof asked us what we envision when we think of the colour red. Some of the answers student gave were of actual red objects, then finally someone answered they just see a splash of red in their mind – which is the answer the prof was looking for – the lack of physical matter, of a definitive shape, or in this case a line. How does it feel rather than how does in look. Very nice Vesna.

  • your comments and presence always warm my heart, thank you so much dear Mui-Ling
    xo

    – Vesna *

  • Richard G Witham
    Richard G Withamalmost 2 years ago

    Very thought provoking poetry Vesna. I think we can give a smile, appreciation and a hug, but if my contribution were a big blue line I’d probably bend into something curvy and fun :-)

  • ahh, I like your comment Richard:)
    curvy is fun:)

    – Vesna *

  • SimplyRed
    SimplyRedalmost 2 years ago

    :

  • thank you so much, so kind of you:)

    – Vesna *

  • TheWanderingBoo
    TheWanderingBooalmost 2 years ago

    wonderful poetry, thought-provoking

  • thank you so much Simon

    – Vesna *

  • Zi-O
    Zi-Oalmost 2 years ago

    Pondering the meaning of life has been a favorite past time of mine over the years….I’ve come to believe our purpose is simply to be who we are. :-) A very thoughtful provoking read.

  • very wise conclusion Zi-0
    thank you very much for reading and your comment, it means a lot to connect

    – Vesna *

  • leapdaybride
    leapdaybridealmost 2 years ago
  • thank you so much!

    – Vesna *

  • Donna19
    Donna19over 1 year ago

    Really interesting Vesna. Though provoking.

  • thank you Donna, your support means a lot to me

    – Vesna *

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