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Across the Universe

My Earth
Big rock in the
shape of oblate spheroid
I step on you softly,
gently, almost timid

You
Carry me
through Space
Keeping me warm
rotating around the Fireplace

You
Found me the Moon
To observe and adore
And Star constellations
To enjoy their galore

I make sure
my steps are soft
Life is beautiful, diverse
As we dance
Across the Universe


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Born in spring, my name means Spring. I love poetry in all its forms.

The word “poetry” derives from the Latin feminine noun poetria, meaning not “poetry” but “poetess”.

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  • Dj SSK
    Dj SSKalmost 3 years ago

    BEAUTIFUL Vesna !
    Syed :))

  • Thank you so much Syed:)

    – Vesna *

  • sandra .
    sandra .almost 3 years ago

    Vesna, you have the planets colliding (in an oh so positive way:)
    This is simply bliss to read, such atmosphere :)
    Sandra… I come in ws peace… xx

  • we, wabi sabi people:) know there’s so many cracks in the Universe and it’s not all so blissful all the time but hey, positive spin is good here and there:)
    so nice to have you close by Sandra
    xoxo

    – Vesna *

  • Angela King-Jones
    Angela King-Jonesalmost 3 years ago

    I love this piece, I feel this one

  • I am so glad Angela:) Thank you so much:)
    xoxo

    – Vesna *

  • Philosophy Lee
    Philosophy Leealmost 3 years ago

    As we can’t take a step without stepping on Something…
    … I applaud your gentle steps of awareness Vesna.

    Gorgeous!
    :)

  • indeed we always step on Something:)
    thank you for your wise and kind words dear Lee:)
    xox

    – Vesna *

  • rob castro
    rob castroalmost 3 years ago

    words are flowing on like endless rain inside a paper cup… brilliant brilliant

  • :))) the best
    thank you so much omg

    – Vesna *

  • vampvamp
    vampvampalmost 3 years ago

  • thank you so much vamp:)

    – Vesna *

  • Diane Johnson-Mosley
    Diane Johnson-...almost 3 years ago

    This is so beautiful, well done !!!

  • Thank you Diane:)

    – Vesna *

  • TheWanderingBoo
    TheWanderingBooalmost 3 years ago

    beautiful (both words and image)

  • thank you so much

    – Vesna *

  • Freijanez
    Freijanezover 2 years ago

    I love this lyric and intelligent metaphor within this sweet and wonderful poem, Vesna. You got really a grace of telling natural reflections as if you were ‘speaking flowers’.

  • speaking flowers:) so lovely
    I whisper perfumed thank you, dear Jose

    – Vesna *

  • Freijanez
    Freijanezover 2 years ago

    “As we dance
    Across the Universe”

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