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Volcanic Morning

Sunshine comes through the window
it is like a shadow
compared to your aglow

(I love you)

Feel the pleasure
Of Surrender
To volcanic morning

At first
It’s a tiny tremble
Like a shaking
Gentle waking

(I love you)

Relax,
Feel the floating

With Love inside of you
Even
Raging passion
Will soften
And subdue

(I love you)

Let’s fly away
Ignite flamingo fire

We’ll drink from
Dewy leaves
Sleep under the
Peaches trees

Yonder waves
Like glitter stars
We’ll tickle our feet

Good Morning my Love

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A “Pleasure Prompt challenge” – using the following 12 random prompts:

sunshine, morning, waking, pleasure, waves, fire, floating, yonder, volcanic, peaches, ignite, dewy, aglow, raging

Please see
Rousing by AnniG
Anni has added the links to more writings inspired by these words

Born in spring, my name means Spring. I love poetry in all its forms.

The word “poetry” derives from the Latin feminine noun poetria, meaning not “poetry” but “poetess”.

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Comments

  • markhadafairday
    markhadafairdayover 3 years ago

    excellent. love it. Mark

  • thank you Mark:)

    – Vesna *

  • AnniG
    AnniGover 3 years ago

    I just love the gentle, tender, loving, rythmic flow of this – a splendid addition to the challenge collection
    Marvellous job, V! Thanks for playing, we should do so again, soon!

  • yessssss let’s do it again and soon:)
    thank you dear Anni for the beautiful inspiration

    – Vesna *

  • rob castro
    rob castroover 3 years ago

    gently thawing the frozen heart with her warm tender whispers … why does she love him?… who knows? to be sure, she sees something in him nobody can… beautiful, msc :-)

  • it’s always like that in love, who knows? who knows?
    so nice to have you around omg:)
    puno osmeha i ljubavi

    – Vesna *

  • dedmanshootn
    dedmanshootnover 3 years ago

    really like the form and flow. fine emotional feel too. very nice work

  • thank you so much for your support, it means a lot

    – Vesna *

  • Farfarm
    Farfarmover 3 years ago

    Great lovesong Vesna !!

  • thank you Michel:)
    xxx

    – Vesna *

  • sandra .
    sandra .over 3 years ago

    This is perfect Vesna x
    sandra WS

  • wabi sabi perfect I hope?:)
    kisses dear Sandra
    xxx

    – Vesna *

  • Betty Smith_Voce
    Betty Smith_Voceover 3 years ago

    Gorgeous Vesna…

  • I am so happy you say so Betty:)
    thank you

    – Vesna *

  • SimplyRed
    SimplyRedover 3 years ago

    love it :)

  • love your comment:) thank you

    – Vesna *

  • Richard G Witham
    Richard G Withamover 3 years ago

    Wonderfully done Vesna. I especially like the final lines
    Yonder waves
    Like glitter stars
    We’ll tickle our feet
    Magical!

  • thank you so much Richard
    and your words magically like a tickle, make me smile:)

    – Vesna *

  • timbuckley
    timbuckleyover 3 years ago

    So beautifully written simple lines like a Japanese painting in words

  • :))) fills my heart with gladness
    thank you so much Tim

    – Vesna *

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