INNER-CHILD

martin venit
Author: martin venit
Word Count: 29
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I LOOK IN
THE EYES OF A
CHILD,
AND SEE MYSELF
AS
I
WAS.
I LOOK IN THE
EYES OF MY DAUGHTER,
I SEE ALL
I
COULD BE.

INNER-CHILD

THIS IS MY FIRST ATTEMPT AT ACTUALLY WRITING POETRY. THE WORDS CAME FROM THIS PICTURE, MY DAUGHTER OR ANY CHILD, ARE THE POEM OF THE UNIVERSE.

INNER-CHILD belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical
  • Jodi Tweed

    Jodi Tweed, 11 months ago

    BEAUTIFUL.

  • martin venit

    martin venit, 11 months ago

    THANK YOU FOR YOUR INSPIRATION.

  • Suzanne German

    Suzanne German, 9 months ago

    profoundly touching.

  • danpatmore

    danpatmore, 9 months ago

    a solid piece of writing, very profound

  • martin venit

    martin venit, 9 months ago

    I REALLY AM GRATEFUL FOR YOUR RESPONSE SUZANNE, THANK YOU.

  • martin venit

    martin venit, 9 months ago

    I’M GRATEFUL, TRULY GRATEFUL FOR YOUR’S AS WELL danpatmore, SO I FELT YOU DESERVED YOUR OWN PERSONAL THANK YOU.

  • Judi Taylor

    Judi Taylor, 8 months ago

    Simply stated but powerful .. I love this.

  • martin venit

    martin venit in reply to Judi Taylor’s comment, 8 months ago

    Thank you once again.

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