The party Is Over...

You have been traveling down a one way street.
That will only take you to your personal defeat.

It all starts out having fun with your friends
but it doesn’t take long until the parting ends.

Your life gets hard, your funds get low,
depression begins to creep in slow.

You have warn yourself out, your body is tired.
Your brain is warped yet, you keep getting wired.

Your party has lasted a little too long.
No one will listen to your sad twisted song.

Now you are traveling a little to fast
and it’s about time to make this all part
of your past.

You are near the end
What will you do?

Drive on… Drive off…
It’s Up To You!!!

By: Vanesse Cathleen

  • scarletmoon

    scarletmoon

    I can relate to that

  • Gregory John O'Flaherty

    Gregory John O...

    I like that. I think everyone could relate.

  • Keeli

    Keeli

    Excellent! Great message! Perfect collaboration!!!!!!!!

  • HeatherTS

    HeatherTS

    This is wonderful the image and the writting are a perfect combo..favd of course

  • vanesse

    vanesse

    Thank you B & B :0)
    comments appreciated…glad you liked it!

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