At Heavens Gate...

No one really knows why
the Good Lord couldn’t wait.
He has taken you to join him
up at heavens pearly gates.

It had happened so fast
I never got the chance to say
how much “I Love You, Mom”
so I am telling you today!

I had finally found acceptance
when I came to understand
Someday, I too will join you
up at heavens promise land.

By: Vanesse Cathleen

  • KEITH  R. WILLIAMS

    KEITH R. WILL...

    beautiful, and sincere

  • vanesse

    vanesse

    Thanks PORASK :o)

  • mazzfarrell

    mazzfarrell

    you write so well keep it up. have you a book published with your work. let me know

  • vanesse

    vanesse

    I do not…YET!
    :o) someday!!!

  • pheonixit

    pheonixit

    I like this one. I often writeletters not just to my mom, also my dad and all my loved ones who are already in heaven, in my letters I say all the things I couldn’t or wouldn’t say while they were here, this has been a way of tremendous healing for me emotionally, sharing joy ,some guilt ,some shame and some beautiful moments shared when we were together.
    Thank you

  • vanesse

    vanesse

    Im touched!!
    thank you too joe!!!

  • Beth Lambert

    Beth Lambert

    That is so lovely. Reminds me of my Gram, my mum often cries still…we only lost her last August. Very touching words.

  • vanesse

    vanesse

    Thank you dear!! Its hard when a love one is lost
    but we can find comfort in knowing we will meet
    them again one day! :o)

  • Estelle O'Brien

    Estelle O'Brien

    Yes so true…I lost my Dad 3 years ago….your words are a comfort to yourself and others.

  • vanesse

    vanesse

    Thank you!! :o)

  • Natella2020

    Natella2020

    This is very sweet, and a good reminder to appreciate what you have while you can.

  • vanesse replied

    I agree Natella…Thank you! :o)

  • budrfli

    budrfli

    Love this, and the way the peace settled!

  • vanesse replied

    in acceptance there is peace..yes, thank you! :o)

  • Keeli

    Keeli

    Beautiful venessa! I LOVE the art you chose too!

  • Shane  Walker

    Shane Walker

    This is so loving and sad also. Great work Vanesse, picture suits this also.

  • Rachael  Hope

    Rachael Hope

    This works perfectly for the image! So beautiful and packed with love and light!

  • vanesse replied

    I have been blessed with amazing collaborations with awsome artists ! I am glad you are enjoying the works and thanks deeply for your comments!!

  • Tony Ryan

    Tony Ryan

    Such an amazingly beautiful image Vanesse. I think if more people really went deep to understand and love their parents that we would all become better parents ourselves.

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